自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details in logical order using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, verb tenses) and avoid irrelevant information. For example, mention when you received a bike and why, linking sentences with words like "but", "after", or "so". Keep to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child, but I own one now. I received it after I finished my 10th grade as a reward for good results, so I often ride it to college. It helps me get around quickly and saves on travel costs.

建議: Answer directly, then give two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use plural forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., "young people", "commute"). Avoid vague phrases like "many peoples" and ensure sentences are coherent.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many young people enjoy riding bikes for leisure and status. Secondly, bikes are an affordable and convenient way to commute in crowded cities, so a lot of people use them daily.

× That time I didn't have bike but now I have my own bike to ride.

✓ At that time I didn't have a bike, but now I have my own bike to ride.

Missing definite/indefinite article before singular countable noun 'bike'. Use 'a' for one unspecified bike. Also add 'At' for correct time expression and a comma before 'but' improves clarity.

× I finished my 12th board exam.

✓ I finished my 12th board exams.

If referring to the set of final exams for 12th grade, use the plural 'exams'. The verb 'finished' is correct past tense; only the noun number needs adjustment to match the usual collocation.

× I get bike after finish my 10th class.

✓ I got a bike after I finished my 10th grade.

Incorrect verb tense and missing articles. 'Get' and 'finish' should be in past tense ('got', 'finished') to match the time frame. Add 'a' before 'bike' and include subject 'I' before 'finished'. Use 'grade' instead of 'class' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, I think bike are popular in our country because many youngsters are like to ride bikes and many peoples are going there by their vehicles.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because many youngsters like to ride bikes and many people go there by their vehicles.

Multiple errors: 'bike are' should be 'bikes are' to match plural subject with plural verb. 'are like to ride' is incorrect; use 'like to ride' (present simple for habitual action). 'peoples' is wrong plural form; correct is 'people'. 'are going there by their vehicles' can be simplified to present simple 'go there by their vehicles' for general statements about habits.