自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите заполнительные слова (например, «uh») и уточните формулировки. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных подробностей, используя связки (например, «because», «so», «for example»). Также следите за артиклями и формами: «ride a bike», «at my maternal grandparents' house».

範例: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child, but at my maternal grandparents' house there were several bicycles, so I learned to ride with my cousins. For example, I used to cycle around their garden every weekend, which helped me become confident quickly.

建議: Более чётко различайте «bikes» и «motorbikes» в начале ответа и добавьте одно конкретное статистическое или ситуационное пояснение. Используйте связки («however», «for instance», «because of») чтобы логично связать идеи и избежать тавтологии.

範例: Bicycles are less common in cities, but motorbikes are very popular in my country because they help people avoid traffic and cost less than cars. For instance, many students and office workers ride motorbikes to commute daily, especially during rush hour.

× Uh, when I was a child I didn't have my own bike, but at my maternal grandparents house there were many bicycles and I learned to ride bike there with my cousins.

✓ Uh, when I was a child I didn't have my own bike, but at my maternal grandparents' house there were many bicycles and I learned to ride a bike there with my cousins.

The original sentence omits the possessive apostrophe in 'grandparents' house' and omits the indefinite article before 'bike'. Use the possessive form 'grandparents'' to show the house belongs to them, and 'a bike' because 'ride a bike' requires an article. Suggestion: write 'my maternal grandparents' house' and 'ride a bike' to be grammatically correct.

× I enjoyed, uh, cycling around their garden and soon became quite confident, so I kept practicing, uh, whenever we visited.

✓ I enjoyed, uh, cycling around their garden and soon became quite confident, so I kept practicing, uh, whenever we visited.

This sentence is grammatically correct regarding verb + -ing usage; 'enjoyed cycling' and 'kept practicing' correctly use -ing forms. No correction needed. Suggestion: maintain the -ing form after 'enjoyed' and 'kept'.

× I think motorbikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to get around quickly and avoid traffic.

✓ I think motorbikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to get around quickly and avoid traffic.

Sentence is correct: subject 'many people' matches plural verb 'use'. No change needed. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement.

× For example, students and office workers often prefer motorbikes since they're cheaper and more convenient than cars.

✓ For example, students and office workers often prefer motorbikes since they're cheaper and more convenient than cars.

The sentence is correct in number agreement: 'motorbikes' plural matches 'they're'. No correction needed. Suggestion: ensure consistent plural forms when comparing to 'cars'.