自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak in the correct tense and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two brief supporting details (where, how often, or a short memory). Use linking words if adding details. Avoid mixing present and past forms.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, and I remember learning to balance on it with the help of my older brother.

建議: Be more specific and natural: give a direct opinion, then support it with one or two reasons or examples using linking words (because, for example, therefore). Use natural collocations (e.g., “popular” with groups or activities, “use bikes for commuting” rather than “using a bike for their everyday living”).

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, lots of children cycle to school and adults ride bikes to work or the market because it is cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense ('do have') with a past time expression ('when I was a child'). Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations (I had a bike when I was a child).

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country right now and a lot of children are using a bike for their everyday living.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country right now, and a lot of children use bikes in their everyday lives.

There are several issues: 'are using a bike' is an unnecessary continuous for a habitual action (use simple present instead), 'a bike' with 'a lot of children' should be plural ('bikes'), and 'everyday living' is better expressed as 'everyday lives'. Use present simple for general habits: 'children use bikes'.