自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response did not answer the examiner's question. For Part 1 you must respond directly and naturally with a short personal answer (1–2 sentences) and then add a supporting detail if needed. Keep responses clear and relevant, use linking words if you add information, and avoid asking the examiner to repeat or send questions. Practice simple sentences such as: “Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was six, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend.”

範例: Yes, I did. I had an old blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every afternoon.

建議: Your answer responds to the question but is disfluent and repetitive, and lacks clear supporting details. Improve by stating a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, “because,” “for instance,” “however”). Keep it to no more than 4–5 sentences and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “popular,” “commuters,” “recreational,” “both men and women”). Practice reducing filler words like “uh.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, city centers have bike lanes and affordable rental schemes, so commuters and students often choose cycling as a convenient option.

× Please send me one question.

✓ I didn't understand. Could you please repeat the question?

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's question and is pragmatically odd. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error: the student seems to ask the examiner to send a question rather than answering. Suggestion: respond directly to the question asked. Example: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or if clarification is needed say 'Could you please repeat the question?'. Use complete, context-appropriate sentences.

× Yes, uh, bikes are quite popular in my country uh, everyone, people, every, people, uh, especially men, uh, is men uh, it is very like because uh, it attracts uh men.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among men, because they find cycling attractive.

This sentence contains multiple fluency and sentence structure problems: disfluent fillers, repetition, incorrect word order ('is men', 'it is very like'), and unclear references. Fix by removing fillers, organizing ideas, and using the appropriate preposition 'among' and phrase 'find cycling attractive'. Suggestion: plan the sentence: state the general point, add a specific group with 'among', and give a clear reason. Maintain subject-verb agreement and proper word choice.