自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời không phản hồi trực tiếp câu hỏi và có lỗi ngôn ngữ. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: khi nào bạn có xe, ai tặng, bạn dùng nó như thế nào). Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng. Giữ tổng câu không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my sixth birthday and I used it to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon. I learned to ride with my older brother, and it helped me develop confidence and independence.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng, có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp ý. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, therefore) và tránh từ lặp như 'bike' quá nhiều. Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Because bicycles are affordable and convenient, many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students often cycle to school and shopkeepers use bikes to deliver goods in crowded areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were try?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'try' which is incorrect word choice for referring to a young person. The question uses past simple 'Did you have' and asks about childhood; the correct noun is 'child'. Suggestion: replace 'try' with 'a child' to match meaning and maintain past tense context.

× Get support bike in my country is very uncommon, because the price of a bike is really cheap, so people, many people in my country can easily bike, buy a bike and you know using a bike is really easily.

✓ Using bikes in my country is very common because the price of a bike is really cheap, so many people can easily buy and ride one.

Multiple issues: word order and sentence structure are incorrect ('Get support bike' makes no sense), word choice errors ('uncommon' contradicted by reasoning), redundancy and incorrect verb forms ('you know using a bike is really easily'). The corrected sentence clarifies meaning, fixes word order, uses appropriate quantifier 'many people', correct verbs 'buy and ride', and correct adverb/adjective usage ('easily' modifies the verbs). Suggestion: simplify sentences, choose correct verbs (buy, ride), and place adverbs after verbs (can easily buy).