自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no) and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, describe what kind of bike it was or how you used it, and link ideas with words like "so" or "also."

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit my grandparents every weekend. Because my neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing there, so I learned to ride without help by the time I was seven.

建議: Your answer gives a basic opinion but is short and slightly unclear. Improve by making the statement more natural, providing a reason and a specific example, and using linking words (for example, because, therefore). Avoid vague phrasing like "I think like that." Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and errands. For example, in the Netherlands cycling is extremely common and there are dedicated bike lanes, so many cities here are very bike-friendly.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error (type 26). The appropriate form is a short past tense answer: 'Yes, I did.' If adding details, use past tense: 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.' Keep verb tense consistent with the question (past simple).

× Yes, I think like that, for example in Netherlands.

✓ Yes, I think so; for example, in the Netherlands.

Two issues apply but per instructions we only correct those matching the provided list: incorrect use of prepositions/article (type 11 and 22). The student omitted the article 'the' before 'Netherlands' and used 'like that' incorrectly. Use 'so' after 'think' to express agreement: 'I think so.' Also add the definite article before country names that require it: 'the Netherlands.' Use a semicolon or connector and a comma to separate clauses: 'Yes, I think so; for example, in the Netherlands.' This fixes the preposition/article usage and makes the sentence natural.