自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 在回答中要更直接地回应问题，并使用简洁、时态一致的句子；避免重复表达和语法错误。可先用一句话明确定义事实，再用一两句补充原因或细节，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。例如把“现在”和“过去”关于骑车的描述分开，用简单过去时描述过去情况，用现在时描述现在情况。

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't confident riding. I wasn't very sporty and I found it hard to keep my balance, so my family never bought one for me. As a result, I still don't ride a bike much today.

建議: 回答时应先给出明确的总体看法，然后用具体例子或数据支持观点，注意句子连贯和分段。避免口语化的断句和语法不完整的长句。可以提到不同城市或年龄层的差异来丰富内容。

範例: Bikes are not very popular in many Chinese cities today, especially in large urban areas. For example, my parents usually commute by subway, and I used to travel to school by car, so I rarely saw people cycling. However, cycling is still common in some smaller cities and among students or delivery workers.

× I actually don't have a bike even when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding a bike.

✓ I actually didn't have a bike even when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding one.

句子中主句描述的是过去的情况，应使用过去时而不是现在时（don’t → didn’t）。另外重复使用“a bike”显得冗余，用“one”更自然。建议在叙述过去事实时统一使用过去时态。

× I'm not a person who is good at sports and I'm not agile enough to make the balance.

✓ I'm not a person who is good at sports, and I'm not agile enough to keep my balance.

原句中“to make the balance”用法不当，习惯表达是“keep one's balance”。同时两个并列分句之间应加逗号以改善句子结构。建议记住固定搭配“keep balance/keep one's balance”。

× So now I don't ride a bike and when I was young I don't.

✓ So now I don't ride a bike, and when I was young I didn't.

句子中有时态不一致：“when I was young”表过去，应使用过去时（don't → didn't）。保持时态一致以避免混淆。

× I didn't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

此句本身语法正确，但注意与前面句子统一时态和避免重复。这里维持过去时陈述过去事实即可。

× Not that popular in China because I see more and more people are trying to take public transportation like my parents they usually go to work by the subway and for me I took my dad's car to get to school so I don't see them ride bikes very often like.

✓ Bikes are not that popular in China because more and more people are using public transportation. For example, my parents usually go to work by subway, and I took my dad's car to get to school, so I don't see people riding bikes very often.

原句结构混乱，包含量词/搭配和句子结构问题。应使用完整句子并调整表达：'Not that popular'需主语+B E动词；'take public transportation'更自然为 'using public transportation'；'they usually'与前面主句混在一起造成断句错误，需分句说明；'see them ride bikes'应为'see people riding bikes'。建议拆分为几句，注意主谓完整与动名词用法（see sb doing）。