自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct topic sentence, then one or two clear supporting details. Use correct verbs and simple past tense (e.g., "I had" or "I rode"). Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and logical. For example, say whether you had a bike, who taught you to ride, and one specific memory or where you rode. Use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me to ride in the park, and I practised with him every weekend until I felt confident.

建議: Your answer shows an idea but lacks clarity and specific reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence: state whether bikes are popular. Then give one or two specific supporting details (who uses them, reasons such as convenience or good bike lanes). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" and complete sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Korea. Many young people use personal or public rental bikes because cities have convenient bike lanes and using a bike is often faster than driving for short trips.

× When I was younger, I usually wrote bike with my father.

✓ When I was younger, I usually rode a bike with my father.

The verb 'wrote' is incorrect; the intended action is riding a bike so use the verb 'rode' (past tense of 'ride'). Also 'bike' as a countable noun needs an article 'a'. This is a sentence structure and verb choice mistake; to improve, use the correct verb for the activity (ride) and include the appropriate article: 'rode a bike'.

× He. Practice said by me.

✓ He taught me how to ride.

The original fragment 'He. Practice said by me.' is ungrammatical and lacks a proper verb structure. The intended meaning is that the father taught the student to practice riding. Use an active past-tense verb and clear object: 'He taught me how to ride.' This fixes sentence fragmentation and clarifies agent and action.

× Yes, in Korea many young people usually ride bike or public bike because. Korea Roads.

✓ Yes, in Korea many young people usually ride bikes or use public bikes because the roads in Korea are convenient.

Several issues: 'ride bike' needs plural or an article ('ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'); 'public bike' should be 'public bikes' or 'use public bikes'; the fragment 'because. Korea Roads.' is ungrammatical and needs completion. I rephrased to 'because the roads in Korea are convenient' to provide a complete reason. To improve, ensure nouns have correct articles or plural forms and combine fragments into a full clause with subject and verb.