自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is direct and correct but too short and lacks supporting detail. To improve, add one or two brief reasons or a short memory to make the response more natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences and avoid fillers (uh, umm). Use a topic sentence then a supporting detail connected with a linking word (for example, because, so, or when).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we used public transport. However, I learned to ride one at age ten at my cousin's house, which made me more confident outdoors.

建議: Your main idea is clear but the answer contains many hesitations and some awkward phrasing. Improve fluency by removing fillers and organizing the response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example using a linking word (for example, because or however). Add a precise detail (e.g., why popularity grew, a statistic, or an example of who cycles now).

範例: Yes, bikes have become very popular in my country because more people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, many cities now have bike lanes and shared-bike programs, so both men and women ride bikes regularly.

× Uh, yes, these days bikes are so usual in our, uh, country.

✓ Uh, yes, these days bikes are very common in our country.

The word 'usual' is not the typical collocation for describing popularity; 'common' or 'popular' is appropriate. Also remove the unnecessary comma and filler words for clarity. Use 'are very common' to match present tense and plural subject agreement.

× But uh, in the past it wasn't usual, umm, definitely for women, but nowadays, umm, men and women can.

✓ But in the past it wasn't common, especially for women; nowadays both men and women can ride bikes.

The original sentence is incomplete and informal. 'Wasn't usual' should be 'wasn't common' (see previous item). The clause 'definitely for women' is awkward and unclear; 'especially for women' is clearer. The final phrase 'men and women can' is missing an object or verb — provide 'ride bikes' to complete the sentence. Use punctuation to separate ideas and remove filler words.