学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接说明目前或过去学习的科目，并保持时态一致。列举科目时可说“civics”，表达原因时不要同时使用“because”和“so”；可补充一句解释你为什么不选理科。

範例: At school, I study Chinese, English, maths, and social studies, including geography, history, and civics. I didn't choose science because it isn't one of my strongest subjects.

建議: 明确回答你是否喜欢英语，并避免重复“practical”。注意时态应为“chose”；可以用一个具体场景说明英语的实用性，例如旅行时与当地人交流。

範例: Yes, I do. English is my favourite subject because it's useful and enjoyable. For example, I can use it to communicate with people when I travel abroad.

建議: 不要依赖“as I mentioned before”，直接回答选择英语的原因。把不清楚的“the concept is similar to Chinese”改为具体说明，例如英语和中文有相似的表达方式；“raising passage”用词不准确，可改成“reading passages and books”。

範例: I chose English because I find it interesting and fairly easy to learn. Some expressions are similar to Chinese, which helps me understand what people mean. Reading books and short passages also gives me useful practice.

建議: 题目问的是英语是否受欢迎，而回答主要在比较不同学科组的课程安排，焦点不够明确。先说明英语在台湾是否普遍或受欢迎，再用学校课程或升学需求作为具体理由；注意“social studies”前后保持一致。

範例: Yes, English is very popular in Taiwan. Students study it at school, and many also take extra classes because English is important for exams and future opportunities. It's also useful when travelling or communicating with people from other countries.

建議: 回答方向清楚，但“many time”应为“more time”，“a more higher”应为“a higher”。避免重复表达“in the future”，并说明一项具体的学习计划，例如准备雅思或考取证书。

範例: Yes. I plan to go to college in the next five years, where I'll continue studying English. I also hope to prepare for the IELTS exam and earn a higher band score, as well as work towards a few useful certificates.

建議: 答案在句中中断，导致意思不完整。先说一个明确的好处，再解释原因；“concern about the finance”可改为“worry about money”，“we can lose all the things”不符合语境，可改为“we can focus on our studies”。

範例: One benefit of being my age is that I can focus on my studies without worrying too much about money. My parents support me financially, so I have more time to learn new things and prepare for my future.

建議: 直接说明你不想换专业，并清楚解释原因。“because”重复了；“the major I have to write now”和“study English for most”表达不自然，可改成“the subject I'm studying now”和“English is useful for my future”。

範例: No, I don't want to change my major. I'd like to keep studying English because I enjoy it and think it will be useful for my future career. It could also give me more opportunities to work or travel abroad.

建議: 清楚表达你偏好早晨学习，并保留一个或两个相关理由。注意主谓一致：“mornings often have”；“have it will give me”结构不正确，可改为“this puts me in a good mood”。

範例: I prefer studying in the morning because I can concentrate better before I get tired. The weather is often pleasant then, and looking out of the window helps me feel relaxed and positive.

建議: 答案有明确数字，也使用了相关习语，但“each week”和“per week”重复。“exam”应为复数或改成“exams”，并可说明这五十小时主要花在什么学习任务上。

範例: I spend around fifty hours a week studying. Since I'm preparing for exams, I have a lot of assignments to complete and subjects to review. I usually divide my time between homework and exam preparation.

建議: 先直接回答是否期待工作，再解释你认为工作还比较遥远。“far from my life”不自然，可说“still a few years away”；“search secure a job”可改成“look for a stable job”。

範例: Yes, I am looking forward to working, although it still feels a few years away because I'm only seventeen. I plan to finish university first and then look for a stable job that suits my interests.

建議: 内容相关且有具体例子。注意说“assist me with my studies”，并将“something that I cannot know”改为“something I don't understand”。可以补充你如何核实 AI 给出的答案，避免听起来完全依赖工具。

範例: I use AI tools such as ChatGPT and Gemini to help with my studies. When I don't understand a question, I ask them to explain it. I also check important information against my textbooks or other reliable sources.

建議: 明确指出你希望学校增加或改善什么设施。当前关于“facilities equipment”和“rooflats”的表达不清楚；如果你指的是遮雨棚，可说“covered shelters”。用“on rainy days”描述下雨天，并解释改进后的好处。

範例: I'd like my school to add more covered shelters around the campus. There aren't enough places to stay dry when it rains, so students often get wet while walking between buildings. More shelters would make getting around much more comfortable.

× I studied many subjects at school such as Chinese, English, maths and social studies, including geography, history and civic, and because I'm not good at science, so I didn't choose science class.

✓ I study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, English, maths and social studies, including geography, history and civics. Because I'm not good at science, I didn't choose a science class.

考官问的是“你正在学习哪些科目”，所以描述目前的学习情况时应使用现在时。这里将“I studied”改为“I study”。“civic”通常是形容词，作为学科名称时应使用“civics”。

× I studied many subjects at school such as Chinese, English, maths and social studies, including geography, history and civic, and because I'm not good at science, so I didn't choose science class.

✓ I study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, English, maths and social studies, including geography, history and civics. Because I'm not good at science, I didn't choose a science class.

“because”和“so”不能在同一个因果结构中这样重复使用。可以用“because”引出原因，后面直接接结果；也可以用“so”引出结果，但不要同时使用两者。

× I studied many subjects at school such as Chinese, English, maths and social studies, including geography, history and civic, and because I'm not good at science, so I didn't choose science class.

✓ I study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, English, maths and social studies, including geography, history and civics. Because I'm not good at science, I didn't choose a science class.

“class”是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里应说“a science class”。

× Yes, I like the subject I choose at school but the subject I really enjoy is English because I think it's practical and it's easy to learn and also it's practical for us to use in the future like traveling around the world.

✓ Yes, I like the subject I chose at school, but the subject I really enjoy is English because I think it's practical and easy to learn. It's also practical for us to use in the future, for example, when traveling around the world.

“I chose”表示过去已经做出的选择；此处是在说明自己之前选了什么科目，所以应使用“choose”的过去式“chose”，而不是现在时“choose”。

× I think as I mentioned before it's easy to learn and the concept is similar to Chinese and I can know what the things they want to express in English. So by raising passage and books, it will be easy.

✓ I think, as I mentioned before, it's easy to learn. The concepts are similar to Chinese, and I can understand what people want to express in English. So it will be easy if I read passages and books.

“what the things they want to express”结构混乱。嵌入式疑问从句应使用“what people want to express”，不需要再加“the things”。另外，原句连接了多个完整意思，拆分后句子结构更清楚。

× I think as I mentioned before it's easy to learn and the concept is similar to Chinese and I can know what the things they want to express in English. So by raising passage and books, it will be easy.

✓ I think, as I mentioned before, it's easy to learn. The concepts are similar to Chinese, and I can understand what people want to express in English. So it will be easy by reading passages and books.

介词“by”后面表示采用某种方式时，动词要使用-ing形式。因此应使用“by reading”，不能说“by raise”或“by raising”来表达“通过阅读”。

× I think as I mentioned before it's easy to learn and the concept is similar to Chinese and I can know what the things they want to express in English. So by raising passage and books, it will be easy.

✓ I think, as I mentioned before, it's easy to learn. The concepts are similar to Chinese, and I can understand what people want to express in English. So it will be easy by reading passages and books.

这里的“passage”泛指多篇文章，与“books”并列时应使用复数“passages”。

× Yes in the next five years I will attend college and I will have many time.

✓ Yes, in the next five years I will attend college, and I will have a lot of time.

“time”在表示时间总量时是不可数名词，不能用“many”修饰。可以说“a lot of time”或“much time”。

× I will have much more time to study and prepare for certificates and I would like to prepare my IELTS test for a more higher, higher band in the future.

✓ I will have much more time to study and prepare for certificates, and I would like to prepare for my IELTS test to get a higher band score in the future.

表示为考试做准备时，通常说“prepare for a test”，而不是“prepare a test”。“prepare for”中的“for”不能省略。

× I will have much more time to study and prepare for certificates and I would like to prepare my IELTS test for a more higher, higher band in the future.

✓ I will have much more time to study and prepare for certificates, and I would like to prepare for my IELTS test to get a higher band score in the future.

“higher”已经是比较级，前面不能再加“more”。另外，“higher band score”是表达更高雅思分数的自然说法。

× I think being at my age, the biggest benefit will be we don't have to concern about the finance and we can lose all the things we have to do is study because our parents provide us financial support and we

✓ I think the biggest benefit of being my age is that we don't have to worry about finances. All we have to do is study because our parents provide us with financial support.

“the biggest benefit will be we...”中，“be”后缺少连接词“that”。“we can lose all the things we have to do is study”也无法构成通顺的句子；表达“我们只需要学习”时应说“All we have to do is study”。原回答最后的“and we”是不完整的句子，因此删除了未完成部分。

× No, I want to keep studying the major I have to write now because because I study English for most and I think it will be very beneficial for our future. So I would like to study English in the future.

✓ No, I want to keep studying the major I have right now because I study English the most, and I think it will be very beneficial for our future. So I would like to study English in the future.

表示“最常学习／学习得最多”时，应使用副词短语“the most”，不能说“for most”。

× I prefer studying in the morning because it's the time I can fully concentrate on the things I do. And because morning often have a good weather and I can look out the windows and have it will give me a good mood when I'm studying.

✓ I prefer studying in the morning because it's the time when I can fully concentrate on the things I do. Mornings often have good weather, and looking out the window puts me in a good mood when I'm studying.

主语“morning”是单数时，不能搭配“have”；如果说“mornings”，主语是复数，搭配“have”才正确。修改后的句子使用复数“mornings”。

× I prefer studying in the morning because it's the time I can fully concentrate on the things I do. And because morning often have a good weather and I can look out the windows and have it will give me a good mood when I'm studying.

✓ I prefer studying in the morning because it's the time when I can fully concentrate on the things I do. Mornings often have good weather, and looking out the window puts me in a good mood when I'm studying.

“weather”通常是不可数名词，前面不能加不定冠词“a”，所以应说“good weather”。

× I prefer studying in the morning because it's the time I can fully concentrate on the things I do. And because morning often have a good weather and I can look out the windows and have it will give me a good mood when I'm studying.

✓ I prefer studying in the morning because it's the time when I can fully concentrate on the things I do. Mornings often have good weather, and looking out the window puts me in a good mood when I'm studying.

以“And because”开头的部分没有形成完整句子；“and have it will give me”也包含冲突的动词结构。可以改成完整句“Mornings often have good weather, and looking out the window puts me in a good mood”。

× As an exam candidate, I have a lot of assignments and exam to prepare. So I hit the books on a regular basis and each week I think I spend approximately fifty hours per week to get a high score.

✓ As an exam candidate, I have a lot of assignments and exams to prepare. So I hit the books on a regular basis, and I think I spend approximately fifty hours per week studying to get a high score.

“assignments”是复数，和它并列的可数名词“exam”也应使用复数“exams”，以表示需要准备多项考试。

× As an exam candidate, I have a lot of assignments and exam to prepare. So I hit the books on a regular basis and each week I think I spend approximately fifty hours per week to get a high score.

✓ As an exam candidate, I have a lot of assignments and exams to prepare. So I hit the books on a regular basis, and I think I spend approximately fifty hours per week studying to get a high score.

“spend + 时间”后面描述所花时间做的活动时，动词应使用-ing形式。因此应说“spend fifty hours studying”。

× I think work will be after five years or after university, I would like to search secure a job.

✓ I think I will start working after five years or after university, and I would like to search for a secure job.

动词“search”后面接寻找的对象时，通常需要介词“for”，因此应说“search for a job”。

× When I'm studying I use AI tools like chat GPT and Germani to assist me my study because whenever I have a question and something that I cannot know, I will ask them for help and they always give me answers immediately.

✓ When I'm studying, I use AI tools like ChatGPT and Gemini to assist me with my studies because whenever I have a question about something I don't understand, I ask them for help, and they always give me answers immediately.

表示“帮助某人做某事／帮助某人处理某方面的学习”时，可以说“assist someone with something”。因此应在“assist me”和“my studies”之间加“with”。

× When I'm studying I use AI tools like chat GPT and Germani to assist me my study because whenever I have a question and something that I cannot know, I will ask them for help and they always give me answers immediately.

✓ When I'm studying, I use AI tools like ChatGPT and Gemini to assist me with my studies because whenever I have a question about something I don't understand, I ask them for help, and they always give me answers immediately.

“study”在这里表示学习活动或学业，通常用复数“studies”表达某人的学业。

× I think in my school some facilities equipment is quite modern and as well. But I think those things have to change will be there less there are fewer rooflats can shelter us under rainy days. So I think it had to be improved.

✓ I think some of the facilities and equipment at my school are quite modern. But I think the things that need to change are the areas that can shelter us from the rain; there are too few of them. So I think this needs to be improved.

“facilities and equipment”由复数名词“facilities”与“equipment”共同构成并列主语，因此谓语应使用“are”，不能用“is”。

× I think in my school some facilities equipment is quite modern and as well. But I think those things have to change will be there less there are fewer rooflats can shelter us under rainy days. So I think it had to be improved.

✓ I think some of the facilities and equipment at my school are quite modern. But I think the things that need to change are the areas that can shelter us from the rain; there are too few of them. So I think this needs to be improved.

“those things have to change will be...”把两个不同的句子结构拼在了一起，导致语法不完整。可以用“the things that need to change are...”引出需要改进的方面。

× I think in my school some facilities equipment is quite modern and as well. But I think those things have to change will be there less there are fewer rooflats can shelter us under rainy days. So I think it had to be improved.

✓ I think some of the facilities and equipment at my school are quite modern. But I think the things that need to change are the areas that can shelter us from the rain; there are too few of them. So I think this needs to be improved.

表达“在下雨时／免受雨淋”时，这里应使用“from the rain”，而不是“under rainy days”。

× I think in my school some facilities equipment is quite modern and as well. But I think those things have to change will be there less there are fewer rooflats can shelter us under rainy days. So I think it had to be improved.

✓ I think some of the facilities and equipment at my school are quite modern. But I think the things that need to change are the areas that can shelter us from the rain; there are too few of them. So I think this needs to be improved.

这里讨论的是学校目前需要改进的情况，应使用现在时“needs to be improved”。“had to be improved”是过去时，表示过去需要改进，与当前语境不符。