学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子有多处语法和用词错误，表达不自然。需要改正时态与词汇（如“rising senior”可保留，但“exhaling”用错，应该是“studying”或“majoring in”）。建议简短直接地回答并补充一两句细节，控制在不超过5句内，并使用连词使句子更连贯。练习正确使用动词形式和固定搭配。

範例: I'm a rising senior at Hangzhou International School. I study subjects including math and economics, and I enjoy economics because it helps me understand how markets work.

建議: 时态使用不当（用过去式“studied”应为现在时“study”），地名拼写不准确（Hanzhou→Hangzhou）。回答应直接并补充具体信息，如学校或环境特点。注意句子简洁并使用连接词提升流畅度。

範例: I study in Hangzhou, which is a beautiful city in eastern China. My school is near the city center, so I can easily visit libraries and cultural sites.

建議: 总体意思清楚，但存在拼写错误（Hanjo→Hangzhou）和小的表达改进空间。可以用更具体的例子说明“educational resources”，并用连接词使推理更有说服力。避免泛泛而谈，举出具体设施或机会。

範例: Yes, it's a great place to study because Hangzhou has many universities, good libraries and tutoring centers, so students can access a wide range of learning resources.

建議: 表达存在语法和搭配错误（“used to it”应为“used to it”→正确说法“I am used to it”或“I've been here for twelve years”）。时态和连贯性需改进，可先给出直接回答，再用一两句支持理由，避免不必要的词汇重复。

範例: No, I wouldn't want any major changes because I've been studying here for twelve years and I'm used to the environment. It already offers stable support and familiar teachers.

建議: 语法和时态有错（如“In this year”应为“this year”，动词搭配应为“apply to universities”，“I wish I will got”应改为“I hope to get”或“I hope I will receive”）。建议简洁表述计划并说明理由或具体步骤，使用正确的动词短语和时态。

範例: This year I will apply to universities in the United States and the United Kingdom, hoping to study economics. I plan to submit my applications by winter and prepare for interviews or additional tests if necessary.

× I'm a rising senior student in high school in Hangzhou International School and I'm exhaling the math and economics.

✓ I'm a rising senior at Hangzhou International School and I'm studying math and economics.

原句中使用了不正确的动词“exhaling”（呼气），应使用表示学习的动词“study”。另外，短语“a rising senior student in high school in Hangzhou International School”冗长且用词不自然，常见表达为“a rising senior at Hangzhou International School”。建议用词准确并简化表达。

× I studied in Hanzhou, which is a beautiful city in the southern part of China

✓ I study in Hangzhou, which is a beautiful city in the southern part of China.

原句用过去时“studied”与上下文不符，问句是关于现在学习地点，应使用现在时“study”。另外地名拼写应统一为“Hangzhou”。建议根据时间背景选择时态，保持地名拼写一致。

× Yes, it's a good place to study because Hanjo is a big city and it has a range of educational resources for the students.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to study because Hangzhou is a big city and it has a range of educational resources for students.

句中“Hanjo”拼写错误，应为“Hangzhou”。另外短语“for the students”在此处可更自然地用泛指“for students”（去掉定冠词）。注意名词单复数与冠词搭配，保证原意表达更自然。

× No, because I used to it. I stayed at this place for twelve years, and I think everything was great at present.

✓ No, because I'm used to it. I have lived in this place for twelve years, and I think everything is great at present.

原句“I used to it”结构错误，应为“I'm used to it”（习惯于此）。“I stayed at this place for twelve years”用过去时表示已离开，但说话人仍在此处，故应使用现在完成时“I have lived in this place for twelve years”。最后“everything was great at present”时态不一致，应为“everything is great at present”。建议注意固定搭配（be used to）和时态一致性。

× In this year I will apply the universities in the United States and the United Kingdom and I wish I will got a great offer for the economics major

✓ This year I will apply to universities in the United States and the United Kingdom, and I hope I will get a great offer for the economics major.

“apply the universities”用法错误，应为“apply to universities”（apply搭配介词to）。短语开头用“This year”比“In this year”更自然。第二部分“I wish I will got”既混用了时态又用错动词形式，应改为“I hope I will get”或“I hope to get”。注意动词搭配和将来时的一致性。