学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh; thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết ngắn gọn để trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I am a student. I currently study at Chongfu High School, and I am in the 11th grade.

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì và trật tự từ), phát âm số lớp và thông tin địa điểm rõ ràng; dùng tối đa 2-3 câu, tránh lặp từ.

範例: I study at Chongfu High School in Biloxi City. I'm in the 11th grade, and I focus on science subjects.

建議: Thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ phù hợp và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh; cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa lý do của bạn.

範例: Yes, it's a good place to study because the teachers are very friendly. For example, they offer extra help after class, which helps me understand difficult topics.

建議: Sửa cấu trúc điều kiện và từ vựng (football field → football field; badminton card → badminton court), dùng câu ngắn gọn và rõ ràng; giải thích lý do thay đổi.

範例: Yes. If the school replaced the football field with a badminton court, I would be very happy because more students here prefer playing badminton and it would encourage active breaks.

建議: Sửa ngữ pháp (want to become an emcee), tránh câu bị cắt ngang; nêu kế hoạch cụ thể và phương pháp bạn đang làm để đạt mục tiêu.

範例: In the future I want to become an emcee, so I practice public speaking every day. At school I focus on English, math and literature to improve my language and presentation skills.

× Am a student.

✓ I am a student.

The subject pronoun 'I' is required at the start of an English declarative sentence. The student omitted the subject pronoun and began with the contraction-like form 'Am', which is ungrammatical. Use 'I am' or the contraction 'I'm'.

× I'm study in Chongfu High School in Biloxi City and in 11 a 12 class.

✓ I study at Chongfu High School in Biloxi City and I am in the 11th and 12th grades.

The student used 'I'm study', mixing present continuous auxiliary with a base verb; the intended meaning is simple present for studying at a school and a stative present for grade level. Also preposition 'at' is used with schools, and grade numbers need ordinal form and parallel structure. Use 'I study at...' and 'I am in the 11th and 12th grades.'

× Yes it is a good place to study because in my school teachers very friendly so I can study more in my school.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers at my school are very friendly, so I can study more there.

Missing verb 'are' for 'teachers' (subject-verb linking) and article/preposition issues: 'in my school teachers' should be 'the teachers at my school'. Also adverbial phrase placement: use 'there' rather than repeating 'in my school'. Provide commas for clarity.

× Yes, I think if my school change to football field into a badminton card then it really great for me.

✓ Yes, I think if my school converted the football field into a badminton court, that would be really great for me.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and word choice: 'change to' should be 'converted' or 'changed', 'football field into a badminton court' needs correct noun 'court', and the conditional requires 'that would be' to express hypothetical result. Reorder and choose correct nouns/verbs.

× In the future I want become too a emcee so I try in hard every day.

✓ In the future I want to become an emcee, so I try hard every day.

Incorrect infinitive 'want become' should be 'want to become'. 'Too' is wrong here; use 'to'. Article before vowel sound should be 'an emcee'. 'Try in hard' is incorrect collocation — use 'try hard'.

× I study English, math and literature in my school and.

✓ I study English, Math, and Literature at my school.

The original ends with a trailing 'and' and has redundant 'in my school' placement. Use 'at my school' and capitalize subjects as appropriate; remove the extra conjunction and complete the sentence.