学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接且语法准确。开头直接说“I'm a university student”即可；避免重复（不要两次说“student”），并注意从属结构（使用正确的介词或连词）。可以加一句简短补充说明你的专业或年级。

範例: I'm a university student at Tianjin University. I'm currently studying engineering in my third year.

建議: 回答信息不准确且句子不自然。应直接说明学校所在城市/省，并用正确地名表达（Tianjin是直辖市，不是省，且位于华北）。避免含糊的短语如“I'm starting”。可给出一两句补充说明学校环境。

範例: I study in Tianjin, which is a major city in northern China. My university is located near the city center, so it's convenient for transport.

建議: 回答要更相关和连贯。不要引入与问题无关的信息（比如‘sport’）。用一到两句给出总体评价，然后用连接词（because, however）给出具体原因，细节要更具体（气候/学习资源等）。减少口头语（um, like）。

範例: Not really, because the climate is extreme — very hot in summer and very cold in winter — which makes studying uncomfortable. Also, there aren't many quiet study spaces on campus.

建議: 回答要更具体且语法正确。说明希望改进的具体方面（例如更多图书馆、更好的空调、更安静的学习环境），并使用连词连接原因和期望的变化。避免语法错误（‘we I study’）。

範例: Definitely. I would like the university to provide more quiet study areas and better air conditioning, so students can concentrate year-round.

建議: 回答要直接并组织清楚。不要说“Next question”。先表明计划（想换专业），然后解释原因和具体计划（什么时候申请、如何准备）。用一两句说明你为此将采取的步骤。

範例: I plan to change my major and study medicine because I'm more interested in healthcare. I will prepare by taking prerequisite courses and applying to the medical program next year.

× I'm a student, I'm a university student and I from Tianjin University.

✓ I'm a student. I'm a university student and I am from Tianjin University.

句中缺少介词短语的正确动词形式。应使用系动词 be 的完整形式“am”而不是省略或错误的“from”位置；此外句子最好分成两句以更清晰自然。建议记住英文中表示“来自某地”要用“be + from”，即“I am from ...”。

× Well, I'm starting in Tianjin province. The city is in southeastern China.

✓ Well, I'm studying in Tianjin Province. The city is in southeastern China.

原句“I'm starting in Tianjin province”结构不合适，动词“start”不符合语境，应使用“study”表明在该地学习。此外地名“Province”应大写以示专有名词。建议使用“I'm studying in ...”来表达正在某地学习。

× Not exactly because I don't like that sport. Umm, to be honest. It's so hot in summer and it's so cold in winter, I can't bear it.

✓ Not exactly, because I don't like the climate. To be honest, it's so hot in summer and so cold in winter that I can't bear it.

原句中使用“that sport”与前后句语境不符，应为“climate”或“weather”。句子断裂（“Umm, to be honest.”）应并入完整句并使用从句连接因果关系，表达更连贯："so... that..."。建议注意语义一致性，避免使用不相关的名词。

× Definitely yes, because I want to change the place where we I study. I want a pretty good place to study.

✓ Definitely yes, because I want to change the place where I study. I want a much better place to study.

原句“we I study”是代词使用错误，出现了多余或冲突的主语代词，应保留单一主语“I”。另外“pretty good”在此语境下语气不够自然，建议用“much better”更符合想要改善环境的意思。建议在句子中只使用一个一致的主语代词。

× Next question because I don't like my subjects now so I want to change my major in the future and I want to study medicine.

✓ Well, regarding my future studies, I don't like my subjects now, so I want to change my major and study medicine.

原句以“Next question”开头不合语境且结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。应使用恰当的转折或引导词（如“regarding my future studies”或“Well”）并用逗号或连词分开原因与结果。建议练习用连接词组织多分句，使表达更自然连贯。