学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đúng hướng nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn, ngắn gọn hơn và sửa ngữ pháp. Tránh lặp từ 'actually' nhiều lần, dùng thì đúng (e.g., 'I am currently a student and will graduate with a bachelor's degree'). Nên chia thành câu rõ ràng: trạng thái hiện tại + kế hoạch tương lai. Thêm liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc.

範例: I am currently a student and will graduate with a bachelor's degree soon. After graduation, I plan to work at a bank to start my career in finance.

建議: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh. Tránh câu dang dở như 'so I can.' Nên nối ý bằng liên từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (tên hoặc loại trường, ví dụ 'an international environment' nghĩa là nhiều sinh viên nước ngoài). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

範例: I study at an international public university in Ho Chi Minh City. It hosts many foreign students, so I often get chances to practice English and learn about other cultures.

建議: Ý chính rõ nhưng dùng từ và cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp 'so'. Nên giải thích cụ thể cách mà môi trường tốt (ví dụ: workshops, multicultural classes). Dùng từ phù hợp ('interact with' thay vì 'contact'), và nối mạch bằng liên từ.

範例: Yes, it's a great place to study because it's very international. I can interact with many foreign students, join multicultural events, and improve my language skills.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa rõ và có lỗi ngữ pháp (need → needs; 'dishes' có vẻ nhầm nghĩa). Cần cụ thể hóa: nếu không muốn thay đổi, nêu lý do rõ ràng (chất lượng giảng dạy, cơ sở vật chất, môi trường xã hội). Tránh nói chung chung như 'friends also good'.

範例: I don't think any major changes are necessary because the teaching quality and facilities are good. I also appreciate the friendly atmosphere among students and the campus services.

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và diễn đạt chính xác: 'study a master's degree' hoặc 'pursue a master's degree'; 'my school teaches everything in English'. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể cho việc chọn chương trình thạc sĩ và mục tiêu học tập (ví dụ chuyên sâu về chuyên ngành, cơ hội nghiên cứu). Giữ ý chính rõ ràng và súc tích.

範例: In the future I plan to pursue a master's degree at my university because courses are taught in English, which will help me improve my language skills and deepen my knowledge in my major.

× Actually currently I'm still a student but I'm waiting for a bachelor's degree and after graduation I plan to have work at a bank.

✓ Actually, I'm currently still a student and I'm waiting to receive my bachelor's degree, and after graduation I plan to work at a bank.

Sentence uses incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Waiting for a bachelor's degree' is better as 'waiting to receive my bachelor's degree'. 'Plan to have work at a bank' is incorrect; use 'plan to work at a bank'. Also adjust word order: 'currently' placed after 'I'm' is natural. Suggestion: use simple present progressive for current state and 'plan to' + base verb for future intention. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Actually, I study at a university in Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam. This is a public school. And international environment so I can.

✓ I study at a public university in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, which has an international environment.

Original has sentence fragments and missing verbs. 'This is a public school. And international environment so I can.' is incomplete. Combine ideas into one complete sentence and use a relative clause 'which has an international environment'. Ensure each clause has a verb. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, it is really great place to study because this is the International University, so I can reach out many foreign students. So this is a good way to contact.

✓ Yes, it is a really great place to study because it is an international university, so I can meet many foreign students. It is a good way to make contact.

Missing articles: 'great place' needs 'a great place'. 'the International University' is incorrect if the name is not specified; use 'an international university'. 'reach out many foreign students' is wrong collocation; use 'meet' or 'reach out to many foreign students'. 'make contact' is more natural than 'contact' alone. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Actually currently I don't think my university need to change anything because it is now really great, the dishes is really good and friends also good.

✓ Actually, I don't think my university needs to change anything because it is really great now; the food is really good and my friends are also good.

Subject-verb agreement: 'university need' should be 'university needs'. 'the dishes is' is incorrect; likely intended 'the food is' or 'the dishes are'; use 'the food is really good' for clarity. 'friends also good' needs verb 'are'. Also improve word order: 'really great now'. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× Actually in the future I will study master degree in my university because my school teach everything by English so I can improve my English skills and my major.

✓ In the future, I will study for a master's degree at my university because my school teaches everything in English, so I can improve my English skills and deepen my knowledge in my major.

Missing preposition and possessive form: 'study master degree' should be 'study for a master's degree'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my school teach' should be 'my school teaches'. Use correct preposition 'in English' not 'by English'. Clarify 'my major' with 'deepen my knowledge in my major'. Grammar problem type ID: 7