学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu khái quát, sau đó bổ sung 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh nói lặp và dùng cụm từ không phù hợp (ví dụ: “in my house” sai ngữ cảnh). Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (I am → I’m, I really proud → I’m really proud).

範例: I’m a Grade 12 student at one of the most prestigious high schools in my town. I’m proud to attend this school because it has strong academic programs and many extracurricular activities.

建議: Câu trả lời lặp ý và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, số nhiều/số ít (high schools vs school, cities). Nên nói rõ tên/đặc điểm trường và cung cấp một chi tiết hỗ trợ. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi cấu trúc (e.g., “it is the largest school in my city”).

範例: I study at the largest high school in my city, which is also considered one of the most prestigious. It has over 2,000 students and a wide range of clubs and facilities.

建議: Câu khẳng định quá ngắn và có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (perfect không tự nhiên, 'they also have me about my study' không rõ nghĩa). Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi nêu 2 lý do cụ thể với liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'and'. Sửa động từ số nhiều/số ít và dùng tính từ phù hợp.

範例: Yes, it’s a great place to study because the teachers are dedicated and provide a lot of support. Also, my classmates are friendly and we often study together, which helps me improve.

建議: Ý chính rõ nhưng cách diễn đạt sai ngữ pháp và thiếu cụ thể. Nên nêu vấn đề cụ thể (ví dụ: phòng học, nhà vệ sinh), dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng như 'I would like them to repair...' hoặc 'I wish they would renovate...'. Tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu.

範例: Yes, I would like the school to renovate some of the older buildings because many classrooms are outdated and need repairs. For example, the science labs could be modernized to improve practical lessons.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu tính mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp (plans is → plans are, continue my study by go → continue my studies by going). Hãy đưa ra mục tiêu rõ ràng (chọn ngành, loại trường), lý do tại sao và một chi tiết hỗ trợ. Sử dụng thì và động từ dạng đúng.

範例: After graduating, I plan to attend university to study technology because I’m interested in software development. I believe this field suits me and I hope to gain practical skills through internships.

× I'm a student in grade 12 in high school in my town, you know, is the one of the most prestigious school in my house and I really proud of it.

✓ I'm a student in grade 12 at the high school in my town; it is one of the most prestigious schools in my area and I am really proud of it.

Incorrect singular/plural forms and article use: 'is the one of the most prestigious school' should be 'it is one of the most prestigious schools'. Also 'in my house' is wrong contextually so replace with 'in my area' or 'in my town'. Use 'at the high school' rather than 'in high school' for clarity, and use 'I am' instead of 'I really proud'. Suggestion: ensure nouns that refer to countable items match singular/plural and use appropriate articles and verbs.

× I study in a high schools in my series.

✓ I study at a high school in my area.

Plural 'high schools' conflicts with article 'a'; use singular 'a high school' or remove article for plural. 'in my series' is unclear; use 'in my area' or 'in my city'. Suggestion: match articles with singular/plural nouns and choose correct prepositional phrases for location.

× It is the largest school in my cities and my school also is a one of the most prestigious school they has.

✓ It is the largest school in my city, and my school is also one of the most prestigious schools.

Incorrect plural 'cities' should be singular 'city' if referring to one place. 'a one of the most prestigious school' should be 'one of the most prestigious schools'. Remove extraneous 'they has'. Suggestion: when using 'one of the', the following noun must be plural.

× My teachers are very dedicated and supportive.

✓ My teachers are very dedicated and supportive.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestion: keep plural verb agreement for 'teachers'.

× Uh, my friends is friendly and they also have me about my study.

✓ Uh, my friends are friendly and they also help me with my studies.

Subject 'friends' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. 'have me about my study' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'help me with my studies'. Use plural 'studies' or 'study' as appropriate. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree in number with subjects and use correct verbs for intended meaning.

× Uh, a building in my school are very old that I think it is to it is repaired and.

✓ Yes. Some buildings in my school are very old, so I think they need to be repaired.

Article and number mismatch: 'a building' with 'are' is inconsistent; choose singular 'a building is' or plural 'buildings are'. The phrase 'it is to it is repaired' is ungrammatical; use 'they need to be repaired' or 'it needs to be repaired'. Suggestion: make subject and verb number agree and use clear modal or necessity phrases like 'need to' for repairs.

× MMM My plans after graduating from high school is continue my study by go to universities and learn about take more technology and I think it's very suitable for me.

✓ My plans after graduating from high school are to continue my studies by going to university and studying more technology; I think it's very suitable for me.

Subject-verb agreement: 'plans' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Use infinitive 'to continue' and gerund 'by going'. 'Universities' can be 'university' (general) and 'learn about take more technology' is incorrect; use 'studying more technology'. Use plural 'studies' for coursework. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct verb forms after prepositions (gerunds after 'by'), and use clear word order for activities.