学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本清楚，但有語法和用詞不夠自然之處。應避免冗長重複、調整語序使句子更簡潔自然，並補充一兩個具體細節（例如想修的專業或證照類型）以增加內容豐富度。注意短語用法（例如“study as a high school student”不自然，應說“I’m a high school student”或“I’m in my third year of high school”）。

範例: I’m a third-year high school student in Taichung. Next year I plan to continue to university to study engineering and also take professional certification courses in computer programming.

建議: 回答直接且內容明確，但語句可更自然與緊湊。避免重複（兩次使用 which）。可補充具體特色或一個例子說明“specializes in English and Chinese”。使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: I attend Washington High School in Taichung, in central Taiwan. The school focuses on English and Chinese, so we have extra language classes and exchange activities to improve our speaking and writing.

建議: 內容正面但表達不夠流暢，句子不連貫且有語法錯誤（like "the sense of. Critical thinking"）。應將句子合併並使用連接詞說明原因或舉例，並改正時態，用現在完成或現在簡單更合適。

範例: Yes, it is. The teachers are patient and supportive, and they offer English conversation classes that have improved my speaking skills and helped develop my critical thinking through group discussions.

建議: 想法清楚但語法與用詞需改進（如 'maintain a new cafeteria' 不自然，應為 'build' 或 'renovate'）。應使用一到兩句具體細節說明，例如希望的食物種類或價格範圍，並用連接詞解釋原因。句子也可更簡潔。

範例: I wish the school would renovate the cafeteria and offer affordable, healthy options like salads and grilled meals. That way I would feel healthier and concentrate better in class.

建議: 回答含糊且語法多處錯誤（'go aboard' → 'go abroad'；'relatively repetitive and incomplete'）。內容不夠具體且最後一句不完整。應明確指出想學的專業、學位類型或原因，並使用連接詞說明優先考量（例如語言環境或學校排名）。

範例: I plan to study abroad in Canada or the UK to pursue a bachelor’s degree in English language and literature. I want to improve my language skills in an immersive environment and possibly earn teaching qualifications while there.

× I currently study as a high school student in Taiwan.

✓ I am currently studying as a high school student in Taiwan.

句子需要用现在进行时表示“目前正在做”的状态。原句用一般现在时“study”听起来像是经常性的动作，而非“目前在就读”。建议将动词改为现在进行时“am studying”。

× This is my third year of high school and I wish to pursue higher education and gain more professional certificates in the upcoming year.

✓ This is my third year of high school, and I wish to pursue higher education and gain more professional certificates in the coming year.

“upcoming year”虽可理解但更常用的是“coming year”。句子时态总体无误，但增加逗号有利于句子结构清晰。保持现在时和将来意愿可用“wish to”或“would like to”。

× I study in a high school named Washington High School which is located in Taichung, which is the middle of Taiwan.

✓ I study at a high school called Washington High School, which is located in Taichung, in the middle of Taiwan.

英语中通常用“study at a school”而非“study in a school”。“named”改为“called”更自然。表达“台湾中部”应使用“in the middle of Taiwan”并放在定语从句之外或用逗号分开。

× My school specializes in English and Chinese.

✓ My school specializes in English and Chinese.

该句本身语法正确，使用介词“in”与“specialize”搭配正确。不需要修改。

× Yes, it is. Teachers are patient and kind.

✓ Yes, it is. The teachers are patient and kind.

在一般陈述中提到学校的教师时，通常使用定冠词“the teachers”来特指该学校的老师。原句缺少定冠词但仍可理解，建议加上“the”更自然。

× They also gave us English conversation courses that can improve my speaking skills and the sense of. Critical thinking.

✓ They also give us English conversation courses that can improve my speaking skills and my sense of critical thinking.

时态应与描述现在情况一致，使用一般现在时“give”。原句句子被不当断开，“the sense of. Critical thinking”应合并为“my sense of critical thinking”。注意“give someone courses”比“gave”更适合长期课程安排。

× I wish my school can maintain a new cafeteria which can provide us affordable and healthy meals.

✓ I wish my school could provide a new cafeteria that would offer us affordable and healthy meals.

“wish”后若表达与现实不同或希望发生的事情，常用情态动词“could/would”而非“can”。另外“maintain a new cafeteria”用词不当，应使用“provide”或“have a new cafeteria”更自然。

× These healthy meals can let me pay more attention in school and feel healthier.

✓ These healthy meals would help me pay more attention at school and feel healthier.

用“can let me”不够自然，使用“would help me”更符合表达愿望/结果的语气。介词应为“pay attention at school”或更自然地“pay more attention in class/school”。

× For my upcoming study plan, I think I will probably go aboard to Canada or England to gain a professional degree in English.

✓ For my upcoming study plan, I think I will probably go abroad to Canada or England to gain a professional degree in English.

单词“aboard”拼写错误，应为“abroad”（出国）。此外“go abroad to Canada or England”可以接受，时态与表达的可能性一致。

× Also, I would like to get more professional.

✓ Also, I would like to gain more professional qualifications.

原句不完整，“get more professional”缺少名词作宾语。应补充具体名词，如“professional qualifications”或“professional certificates”。