学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and directly answer. Start with a clear topic sentence ("I am a student.") then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and nouns (e.g. "I am a student at the University of Technology and Applied Sciences. My major is Business, and I specialize in Logistics."). Avoid trailing unfinished sentences.

範例: I am a student at the University of Technology and Applied Sciences. My major is Business and I specialize in Logistics. At the moment I am focusing on finishing my degree so I can graduate next year.

建議: Give a direct, clear answer naming the institution and location, then add one specific detail. Use correct vocabulary ("University of Technology and Applied Sciences in Al-Musannah") and correct subject words ("major" not "measure"). Avoid incoherent phrases. Use linking words if adding detail.

範例: I study at the University of Technology and Applied Sciences in Al-Musannah. I am majoring in Business, and I am taking courses in statistics to support my logistics specialization.

建議: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words ("because", "for example"). Avoid repetition and general adjectives without explanation. Describe what makes the teachers or environment good (supportive faculty, resources, study facilities).

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers are very supportive and the campus has excellent facilities. For example, there are modern classrooms and a quiet library that help me focus on my studies.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concrete reasons. Avoid unclear phrases ("writable as") and use correct expressions ("well organized"). Use linking words ("because", "for instance").

範例: No, I would not change anything because the university is well organized and the staff plan activities to help students learn. For instance, there are regular workshops and good academic advising.

建議: Respond with a clear statement of plans, using correct terms ("IELTS", "bachelor's degree"). Give one specific step or timeline and use linking words. Avoid vague repetition. For example, say when you plan to take IELTS and your goal after graduation.

範例: My plan is to take the IELTS exam next year so I can continue and complete my bachelor's degree. After that, I hope to graduate and look for a job in logistics or pursue a master's degree.

× Actually I am now student in university technology and applied science.

✓ Actually I am now a student at the University of Technology and Applied Sciences.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'student' and incorrect preposition and capitalization for the institution name. Use 'a student' to indicate one person and 'at' for institutions; proper nouns should be capitalized.

× My major is business students.

✓ My major is Business Studies.

Incorrect plural noun 'students' used where the field name 'Business Studies' is intended. Use the correct noun phrase for the academic program and capitalize it as a proper name.

× The specialization is logistics.

✓ My specialization is Logistics.

Missing possessive reference and capitalization. More natural to say 'My specialization is Logistics.' to show it belongs to the student.

× So I prefer now complete my studies and graduate.

✓ So I prefer to complete my studies now and graduate.

Missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'complete' and awkward word order. Place 'now' after the infinitive or before 'complete' for clarity.

× So I will go and.

✓ So I will go on to further studies after graduation.

Sentence incomplete and unclear. Provide a full verb phrase and clarify intended action; 'go on to' or 'continue with' are common collocations.

× I I am student in university and applying science and al musana.

✓ I am a student at the University of Applied Sciences in Al Musana.

Missing article 'a', incorrect institution name form, wrong preposition 'in' should be 'at' for studying at an institution, and proper capitalization for place name.

× My measure is business and my specialized is statistic so I will get the welcome lidar.

✓ My major is Business and my specialization is Statistics, so I will get a relevant degree.

Multiple errors: 'measure' should be 'major', 'specialized' should be 'specialization', 'statistic' should be 'Statistics', and the phrase 'welcome lidar' is unclear; replaced with a grammatically coherent phrase 'a relevant degree'. Ensure nouns match academic terms.

× Is it a good place to study?

✓ Is it a good place to study?

This sentence is correct as written; present simple is appropriate for general truth or habitual situations.

× Yes, it is. It is. It is a good place to study because I think it is, or actually I am in a good environment.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because I am in a good environment.

Remove redundant repetitions and hesitations. Present simple 'is' and 'am' are correct; streamline the sentence for clarity and fluency.

× The teachers, the many girls, the students, the environment of this university is very amazing.

✓ The teachers, many students, and the university environment are all excellent.

Subject-verb agreement and listing issues: use plural verb 'are' for multiple subjects; 'many girls, the students' is redundant—use 'many students' or specify groups. 'Amazing' is informal; 'excellent' is clearer.

× I think no, I would not change anything because I think everything is in writable as and everything is organized and planning to help others make the best things they can made it in this environment.

✓ I don't think so; I would not change anything because everything is well organized and planned to help students achieve their best in this environment.

Multiple grammar problems: negative response should be 'I don't think so.' 'In writable as' is meaningless; use 'well organized and planned'. 'Others make the best things they can made it' mixes tenses and forms—use 'help students achieve their best'.

× Actually my future study plans, I want to get the eyelets to complete my degrees in university because I want to graduate with baccalaureate.

✓ For my future study plans, I want to get the IELTS qualification to continue my university studies because I want to graduate with a baccalaureate.

Clarify 'eyelets' to 'IELTS' (English test) and use 'get the IELTS qualification'. Use 'continue my university studies' instead of 'complete my degrees' if intending further study, and add the article 'a' before 'baccalaureate'. Ensure consistency in noun phrases.

× So yeah, this is my primary goals in this.

✓ So yeah, these are my primary goals.

Number agreement: 'goals' is plural so use 'these are' not 'this is'. Remove 'in this' which is unnecessary. Ensure demonstrative matches plural nouns.