机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 「Yes, I had」はこの質問への自然な答えとしては「Yes, I did.」を使います。また、「played with my friend to play」は不自然なので、「played baseball or basketball with my friends」のように表現しましょう。最後の部分は「It was a very happy and memorable experience.」とすると文法的に正確です。活動の具体的な頻度や、その活動が好きだった理由を1文追加すると、内容がより具体的になります。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often played baseball and basketball with my friends after school. It was a lot of fun, and those games gave me many happy and memorable experiences.

建議: 質問は「people」について尋ねているため、「Yes, they should.」または「Yes, I think people should.」と答えます。「because children learn, have to play...」は文の構造が不明確です。まず理由を明確に述べ、その後に「For example」などのリンク語を使って具体例を加えましょう。また、「activities which is running at the moment」は不自然で、「activities that are currently available」などに言い換えられます。

範例: Yes, I think people should try different activities because they can discover new interests and develop useful skills. For example, children might try sports, music, or art, and one of these activities could become a lifelong hobby.

× Yes, I had. I often played with my friend to play baseball or basketball, which made me very happy and memorable experience.

✓ Yes, I did. I often played baseball or basketball with my friends, which made me very happy and gave me many memorable experiences.

The phrase 'played with my friend to play baseball or basketball' is awkward because 'play' is repeated and the sentence structure is unclear. Also, 'which made me very happy and memorable experience' incorrectly places 'memorable experience' after 'made me.' Use a parallel structure: 'made me very happy and gave me many memorable experiences.' For a question beginning with 'Did you...?', the natural short answer is 'Yes, I did.'

× Yes, I had. I often played with my friend to play baseball or basketball, which made me very happy and memorable experience.

✓ Yes, I did. I often played baseball or basketball with my friends, which made me very happy and gave me many memorable experiences.

Because the student describes regularly playing with more than one friend and having repeated experiences, the plural forms 'friends' and 'experiences' are more appropriate. Use singular nouns when referring to one person or one experience, and plural nouns when referring to multiple people or repeated experiences.

× Yes, I had. I often played with my friend to play baseball or basketball, which made me very happy and memorable experience.

✓ Yes, I did. I often played baseball or basketball with my friends, which made me very happy and gave me a memorable experience.

The singular countable noun 'experience' needs an article, such as 'a.' However, in this context, 'many memorable experiences' is more natural because the student says 'often played.' Remember to use 'a' or 'an' before a singular countable noun when it is mentioned generally.

× Yes, I should, because children learn, have to play with their friends and have to take part in activities which is running at the moment.

✓ Yes, they should, because children can learn by playing with their friends and taking part in activities that are available at the moment.

The question asks what 'people' should do, so the pronoun in the answer should be 'they,' not 'I.' Pronouns must agree with the person or group mentioned in the question. 'They should' correctly refers to 'people.'

× Yes, I should, because children learn, have to play with their friends and have to take part in activities which is running at the moment.

✓ Yes, they should, because children can learn by playing with their friends and taking part in activities that are available at the moment.

After the preposition 'by,' use the -ing form: 'by playing' and 'taking part.' When two activities follow 'by,' they should have a parallel form: 'by playing ... and taking part ...'.

× Yes, I should, because children learn, have to play with their friends and have to take part in activities which is running at the moment.

✓ Yes, they should, because children can learn by playing with their friends and taking part in activities that are available at the moment.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to the plural noun 'activities,' so a plural verb would be required: 'activities which are ...,' not 'activities which is ....' In the correction, 'that are available' is used because activities are available; they do not usually 'run.'