机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, then add one or two specific details. Correct the grammar and word-choice errors: use “many chances” instead of “many chance,” “extracurricular” as one word, and “such as” or “including” to introduce examples. Also, connect the ideas more clearly instead of joining several clauses with “and.”

範例: Absolutely. I had many chances to take part in extracurricular activities at school, such as camping and dancing. I particularly enjoyed camping because it allowed me to spend time outdoors and work with my classmates. These activities were both enjoyable and useful.

建議: This is a clear and well-developed answer with a direct opinion, reason, and examples. To make it more natural and precise, replace “push the limits” with “challenge themselves,” use the hyphenated form “problem-solving,” and briefly explain how one example develops adaptability. Avoid suggesting that people must try literally everything; “as many different things as possible” is more natural.

範例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because stepping outside their comfort zones helps them build confidence. For example, learning a new skill or travelling alone can develop problem-solving abilities and make people more adaptable. These experiences also help them discover their interests and become more independent.

× Absolutely. I was so lucky to have many chance to engage in some extra curricular activities at school, like camping or dancing and it was really fun.

✓ Absolutely. I was so lucky to have many chances to engage in some extracurricular activities at school, like camping or dancing, and it was really fun.

The quantifier many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Therefore, chance should be changed to chances. Extracurricular is normally written as one word, and a comma before and improves the sentence structure.