机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, but add one or two supporting details. Explain what your parents encouraged you to do instead and give a specific example of an activity you did not have the chance to try. Aim for two or three complete sentences rather than answering with only “No.”

範例: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities as a child. My parents were quite strict and wanted me to focus mainly on my schoolwork, so I usually stayed at home and studied instead of joining clubs or trying sports.

建議: State your opinion clearly at the beginning because the question asks whether people should try different things. Then give a logical reason and a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases such as “tie nail activity” and “my palin”; use “try new activities” and “my parents were quite strict.” Also, finish your sentences and keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I think people should try different activities because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. However, they should not try too many things at once, as this could be stressful. For example, someone might try a sport, a musical instrument, and a creative hobby before deciding which one they enjoy most.

× No, I didn't have any opportunity to tie nail activity at a try.

✓ No, I didn't have any opportunity to try any new activities.

The phrase 'to tie nail activity at a try' does not form a grammatically correct infinitive phrase. Use 'to try' followed by the object 'any new activities.'

× My palin were quite stick and prefer me to forget on school.

✓ My parents were quite strict and preferred me to focus on school.

The answer refers to your childhood, so the past-tense form 'preferred' is needed instead of 'prefer.' The phrase 'preferred me to' should be followed by the base verb 'focus.'

× My palin were quite stick and prefer me to forget on school.

✓ My parents were quite strict and preferred me to focus on school.

'Stick' is not the correct adjective in this context. The correct adjective is 'strict,' meaning that your parents had firm rules.

× My palin were quite stick and prefer me to forget on school.

✓ My parents were quite strict and preferred me to focus on school.

The verb 'focus' is followed by the preposition 'on,' so the correct phrase is 'focus on school.' 'Forget on school' is not a correct English expression.

× So I will only stay at home and study later than joining cubs or

✓ So I would only stay at home and study rather than join the Cubs.

Because you are describing what happened or would happen during your childhood, 'would' is more appropriate than the future form 'will'.

× So I will only stay at home and study later than joining cubs or

✓ So I would only stay at home and study rather than join the Cubs.

'Later than' refers to time, but the intended meaning is contrast or choice. Use the conjunction 'rather than' to show that studying was preferred to joining the Cubs.

× So I will only stay at home and study later than joining cubs or

✓ So I would only stay at home and study rather than join the Cubs.

When referring to the organization or group called 'the Cubs,' use the definite article 'the.'

× So I will only stay at home and study later than joining cubs or

✓ So I would only stay at home and study rather than join the Cubs.

The original sentence ends with 'or' and is incomplete. The corrected sentence has a complete structure and clearly contrasts staying home and studying with joining the Cubs.