机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “Yes, I did,” not “Yes, I do.” Answer directly, then give one or two specific examples. The phrase “if I'm not but missing any of my memories” is unclear, and “swimming and bikes” should be changed to “swimming and riding bikes.” Avoid listing too many activities without explaining when or why you enjoyed them.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had several opportunities to try new activities, such as basketball, swimming, and riding bikes. I especially enjoyed swimming because it was exciting and helped me stay fit.

建議: State your opinion clearly and support it with a logical reason and a specific example. Use correct subject–verb agreement and natural expressions: “Trying different things teaches people new skills” instead of “the different things always tells you.” Avoid repeating “things” and using unclear phrases such as “buy new things,” “It’s lying,” and “Like it’s been.” You can also explain that failure provides valuable experience, but avoid claiming that people will never fail again.

範例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because they can discover new interests and develop useful skills. Even if they fail, they can learn from the experience and improve next time. For example, someone who tries a new sport may not be successful at first, but regular practice can help them become more confident.

× Yes, I do if I'm not but missing any of my memories.

✓ Yes, I did, if I remember correctly.

The question asks about a childhood experience in the past, so the answer should use the past-tense auxiliary did, not the present-tense do. The phrase if I'm not but missing any of my memories is also incorrectly formed; if I remember correctly is a natural expression.

× I think when I was a child I really enjoyed a lot of activities such as playing basketball or swimming and bikes.

✓ I think that when I was a child, I really enjoyed many activities, such as playing basketball, swimming, and riding bikes.

The activities in the list should have a parallel grammatical form. Playing basketball and swimming are gerund forms, so bikes should be changed to riding bikes. Using and before the final activity also makes the list clearer.

× Yes, I agree with this because the different things always tells you like you can learn a lot of things, buy new things if you failed?

✓ Yes, I agree with this because different activities always tell you that you can learn many things and try new things if you fail.

The plural subject activities requires the plural verb tell, not the singular verb tells. The sentence also needs that after tell to introduce the idea that follows. Because this is a general statement, fail should be in the present tense, not the past tense failed.

× Yes, I agree with this because the different things always tells you like you can learn a lot of things, buy new things if you failed?

✓ Yes, I agree with this because different activities always tell you that you can learn many things and try new things if you fail.

The conditional clause describes a general situation, so it should use the present-tense verb fail. The past-tense form failed does not fit the general meaning here.

× Yes, I agree with this because the different things always tells you like you can learn a lot of things, buy new things if you failed?

✓ Yes, I agree with this because different activities always tell you that you can learn many things and try new things if you fail.

Like is not the appropriate conjunction for introducing a complete idea after tell. Use that instead. The conjunction and correctly connects the two related actions learn many things and try new things.

× It's lying because you take a lesson about this and you never failed again.

✓ It's like this because you learn a lesson from it and never fail again.

The sentence expresses a general result, so learn and fail should be in the present tense. The phrase take a lesson about this is unnatural; learn a lesson from it is the appropriate expression. It's like this also creates a grammatically complete and meaningful sentence.

× Like it's been.

✓ That's how it is.

Like it's been is an incomplete and unclear sentence fragment. That's how it is is a complete sentence with a subject, verb, and clear meaning.