机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答方向是对的，但存在明显的时态、搭配、重复和自我纠正问题。应直接使用过去时，例如“when I was a child”和“I had opportunities”。此外，“in my child”应改为“in my childhood”，“take some activities”应改为“take part in activities”。建议用清晰的结构：先直接回答，再说明是谁带你参加，最后给出一两个具体活动及感受。避免重复“they also”和“like”，并且“jumping”过于模糊，可以说明是“jumping rope”或“trampoline jumping”。

範例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. My friends often invited me to go hiking or play sports after school. For example, we sometimes went hiking in the countryside, which was exciting because I enjoyed exploring new places.

建議: 回答没有清楚表达观点，且出现大量无法理解的词语、重复和未完成句子，因此影响自然度、连贯性和有效性。应先明确回答“Yes, I think people should try different things”，然后给出一个主要理由，再补充具体结果或例子。“avoid substituting by AI”表达不自然，可改为“remain competitive in the job market as AI develops”；“trying new things”也比“Trimoving”准确。建议控制在3至4句，并使用“because”“for example”连接观点和细节。

範例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities whenever possible. This helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone who tries cooking, sports, or photography may find a new passion and become more confident.

× Yes, I think I have some opportunities to take part in some activities in my child.

✓ Yes, I think I had some opportunities to take part in some activities as a child.

问题发生在过去，所以应该使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had。表示“小时候”时，不能说 in my child，应使用 as a child 或 in my childhood。

× ...in my child.

✓ ...as a child.

child 表示“孩子”时，不能直接与 in 搭配来表达“小时候”。应使用 as a child；也可以说 in my childhood。

× I take some activities, for example like hiking, like jumping.

✓ I took part in some activities, for example, hiking and jumping.

这是在描述童年时期发生的事情，因此 take 应改为过去式 took。另外，take activities 不是自然的搭配，应使用 take part in activities，表示“参加活动”。

× Okay, so I have so I had so many friends in my childhood and they also they also with also with I take some activities.

✓ I had many friends in my childhood, and we also took part in activities together.

原句包含大量重复和不完整结构，例如 have so I had、they also 以及 with I。需要重新组织主语、谓语和宾语，使句子结构完整、清楚。由于谈论的是童年经历，使用 had 和 took part in。

× ...we also took part in activities together, for example, hiking and jumping.

✓ ...we also took part in activities together, such as hiking and jumping.

此处的时态使用 took part in 是正确的，因为内容发生在过去。将 for example like 改为 such as，可以避免重复，使举例表达更自然。

× Yes, I definitely see visual trauma things because in the DIGS people need to learn more skills to help them to help them avoid avoid substituting by AI.

✓ Yes, I definitely think people should try different things because, in the future, they will need to learn more skills to avoid being replaced by AI.

原句中 visual trauma things 和 the DIGS 造成句意不清，且 help them to help them、avoid avoid 重复。substituting by AI 结构错误；表达“被人工智能取代”应使用被动结构 being replaced by AI。

× ...avoid substituting by AI.

✓ ...avoid being replaced by AI.

这里的意思是“避免被人工智能取代”，人是动作的承受者，所以需要使用被动语态：being replaced。不能使用 substituting by AI。

× And I think maybe trying new things can help us to improve our abilities and maybe

✓ I think trying new things can help us improve our abilities and become more adaptable.

原句最后停留在 and maybe，没有完成后续意思，因此句子不完整。需要补充完整的谓语或结果，例如 become more adaptable。help 后面可以接动词原形 improve，因此 help us improve 比 help us to improve 更自然，但两者在语法上都可以。