机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，并提供了具体例子和结果，结构基本清晰。不过，需改进语法和搭配：将“provided me numerous chances”改为“provided me with numerous opportunities”；“the speaking the speech in competition”应改为“speech competitions”；由于是在描述童年经历，建议使用一般过去时，如“I took part in...”，而不是不自然的“I’d been going...”。此外，可以使用“for example”和“as a result”等连接词，使细节衔接更自然。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents and teachers gave me plenty of opportunities to try new activities. For example, I took part in speech competitions from Grade Three onwards, which helped me improve my English-speaking skills. As a result, I became much more confident when speaking in public.

建議: 回答观点明确，也进行了“兴趣爱好”和“学业”的对比，内容较有逻辑。需要避免重复，如“try as many hobbies as they’d like”中的“hobbies”重复，可改为“try different activities”。“expand their scope of interest”不够自然，建议使用“develop a wider range of interests”；“when it is associated with academic performance”表达生硬，可改为“when it comes to their studies”。最后应补充一个具体例子或结果，并使用“however”连接转折，使答案更完整、更自然。

範例: It depends. I think people should try different hobbies because this can broaden their horizons and help them develop a wider range of interests. However, when it comes to academic performance, they should focus more on their main subjects instead of spreading themselves too thin. For example, a student preparing for important exams may need to limit the number of new activities they take up.

× My parents and my schools provided me numerous chances to take part in all kinds of activities.

✓ My parents and my schools provided me with numerous chances to take part in all kinds of activities.

动词 provide 表示“提供某人某物”时，常用结构是 provide somebody with something，因此 me 后面需要加介词 with。建议记住固定搭配 provide sb. with sth.

× For example, I'd been going to the speaking the speech in competition since I was in grade three and I enjoy that.

✓ For example, I took part in speaking competitions from Grade Three onward, and I enjoyed them.

“going to the speaking the speech in competition”结构混乱，不能清楚表达“参加演讲比赛”。应使用固定搭配 take part in speaking competitions。原句还把过去经历和现在时混用，因此改为完整、清晰的过去时句子。

× For example, I'd been going to the speaking the speech in competition since I was in grade three and I enjoy that.

✓ For example, I took part in speaking competitions from Grade Three onward, and I enjoyed them.

“speaking competitions”表示多次参加的演讲比赛，因此 competition 应使用复数形式 competitions。后面的 them 也与复数名词 competitions 保持一致。

× For example, I'd been going to the speaking the speech in competition since I was in grade three and I enjoy that.

✓ For example, I took part in speaking competitions from Grade Three onward, and I enjoyed them.

题目询问的是童年经历，应该使用过去时。原句中的 enjoy 是一般现在时，应改为 enjoyed；同时，took part in 更适合描述过去参加过的活动。回答过去经历时，要注意整段保持过去时一致。

× It helps me enhance my English speaking ability.

✓ It helped me improve my English-speaking ability.

这里继续描述童年参加活动带来的过去影响，因此 helps 应改为过去式 helped。improve my English-speaking ability 是更自然的表达。描述过去经历及其作用时，建议使用 helped，而不是现在时 helps。