机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接切题，也提供了具体活动和感受，内容较自然。但“another children”应改为“other children”或“another child”；“rarely play”应改为过去时“rarely played”；“then”可改为“at that time”；“I feel sad”应改为过去时“I felt sad”。此外，hide-and-seek通常是和朋友一起玩的，因此“felt shy or nervous”可能比“felt sad”更符合语境。可以使用“However”连接转折，并补充一个具体结果，使答案更连贯。

範例: Yes, I had the chance to try hide-and-seek with some other children in elementary school. It was a new experience because I rarely played with other kids at that time. At first, I felt a little shy, but I soon became excited because I made some new friends. As a result, I became more willing to join group activities.

建議: 观点明确，理由充分，并使用了“so”和“for example”来组织内容。主要问题是结尾“better prepared for new”不完整，应改为“better prepared for new challenges or opportunities”；“acquire different skills or abilities”略显重复，可以改为“develop a range of skills”。建议加入一个具体例子或结果，例如学习新软件能提高学习或工作的效率，同时避免把“society”和“communities”并列得过于宽泛。

範例: Absolutely. I think people should try a variety of activities because the world is changing so quickly. For example, learning digital tools and communication skills can help us adapt to new study or work environments. As a result, we become more flexible and better prepared for unexpected challenges.

× Yes, I remember the first time I played hide and seek with another children in elementary school.

✓ Yes, I remember the first time I played hide and seek with another child in elementary school.

“another”表示“另一个”，后面必须接可数名词单数。因此，“another children”应改为“another child”。

× It was a new experience because I rarely play with other kids then.

✓ It was a new experience because I rarely played with other kids then.

句子中的“It was”和“then”表明事情发生在过去，所以“play”应使用一般过去时“played”。

× So I feel sad at first but also excited to make new friends.

✓ So I felt sad at first but also excited to make new friends.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，属于过去发生的事情，因此“feel”应改为过去式“felt”，与前文的过去时保持一致。

× If you can acquire different skills or abilities, for example learning digital tools and communication skills, you will be more flexible and better prepared for new.

✓ If you can acquire different skills or abilities, for example learning digital tools and communication skills, you will be more flexible and better prepared for new challenges.

“new”是形容词，通常需要修饰一个名词。“prepared for new”后面缺少名词，因此应补充“challenges”，构成“prepared for new challenges”，意思是“为新的挑战做好准备”。