机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details, such as the activity, when you did it, and how you felt about it. Use the past tense accurately, for example, “I had the opportunity to...” or “When I was a child, I...”.

範例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined a swimming class when I was eight, and I really enjoyed learning new skills and making friends there.

建議: You repeated the examiner’s question rather than expressing an opinion. Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, I think people should...” or “Not necessarily...”. Then support your view with a reason and a specific example, using linking words such as “because,” “however,” or “for instance.”

範例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them discover their interests and abilities. For instance, someone who tries cooking, sports, and music may eventually find a hobby that suits their personality.

× Did you have any opportunity to take part in new activities as a child?

✓ I had opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.

The question uses the plural noun 'opportunities,' so the answer should also use the plural form when referring to more than one opportunity. In addition, the student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Use a past-tense statement beginning with 'I had' because the question asks about childhood experiences.