机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes useful supporting details, such as sports lessons, music lessons, school clubs, and summer camps. However, “at a trike” appears to be an error, probably meaning “as a child,” and “I took sports and music lessons” would be more natural as “I took sports and music classes.” The answer is also incomplete because it ends with “where I tried swimming.” Finish with a clear result or personal reaction, and use linking words such as “For example” and “As a result.”

範例: Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities as a child. My parents encouraged me to explore different hobbies, so I took sports and music classes, joined several school clubs, and attended summer camps. For example, I learned to swim at one of the camps, and this experience made me more confident about trying unfamiliar activities.

建議: You give a clear opinion and a relevant reason, and expressions such as “discover hidden interests and talents” and “broaden your horizons” are effective. However, the second sentence is unfinished, ending with “sometimes,” so the answer lacks a complete example or result. Also, “because it’s hard to discover...” is less logical here; “because trying different things helps people discover...” would be clearer. Complete the idea with a specific example and a concluding result.

範例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible, because this helps them discover hidden interests and talents and makes life more exciting. For instance, someone who tries cooking, photography, or a new sport may discover a skill they never knew they had. Even if they do not enjoy every activity, they can learn something useful and become more open-minded.

× Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to take part in new activities at a trike.

✓ Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to take part in new activities at a young age.

The preposition and phrase at a trike are incorrect in this context. Use at a young age to describe the time when you were a child. You could also say as a child.

× For instance, experimenting with a range of hobbies or learning practical skills can broaden your horizons and sometimes

✓ For instance, experimenting with a range of hobbies or learning practical skills can broaden your horizons and sometimes lead to unexpected opportunities.

The sentence is incomplete because it ends with the adverb sometimes and does not state what may happen sometimes. Complete the structure by adding a verb phrase, such as lead to unexpected opportunities. When speaking, make sure each sentence has a complete idea before stopping.