机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in the past tense and avoid repeated or incorrect phrases such as “to to,” “whenever when,” and “I’ll like.” Clearly explain whether you had opportunities and give one specific example. Use linking words such as “however” or “instead” to make the contrast clear.

範例: Not really. When I was a child, I did not have many opportunities to try new activities because I usually stayed at home. Instead, I helped my family with household chores, such as washing the dishes and cleaning the house.

建議: State your opinion once and use the correct structure “try different things” rather than “try to different things.” Use the pronoun “their” consistently instead of “her,” and add a specific reason or example to develop your answer. A linking word such as “because” can connect your opinion to the explanation.

範例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially outside their homes. This can help them discover new interests and become more confident. For example, they could learn a sport, join a club, or travel to a new place.

× Yeah, I don't have a chance to to grab opportunities whenever when I was a child I'll like do everything in my house to clean the dishes.

✓ Yeah, I didn't have many opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. I liked doing things at home, like cleaning the dishes.

The question refers to the past, so use the past-tense forms didn't have and liked instead of don't have and I'll like. When describing a past experience, keep the main verbs consistently in the past tense.

× Yeah, I don't have a chance to to grab opportunities whenever when I was a child I'll like do everything in my house to clean the dishes.

✓ Yeah, I didn't have many opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. I liked doing things at home, like cleaning the dishes.

After liked, use the gerund form doing. Also, after like in the example, cleaning is appropriate because it describes an activity.

× Yeah, I don't have a chance to to grab opportunities whenever when I was a child I'll like do everything in my house to clean the dishes.

✓ Yeah, I didn't have many opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. I liked doing things at home, like cleaning the dishes.

Whenever and when should not be used together in this sentence. Use one time conjunction, such as when, to introduce the past-time clause.

× Yeah, I don't have a chance to to grab opportunities whenever when I was a child I'll like do everything in my house to clean the dishes.

✓ Yeah, I didn't have many opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. I liked doing things at home, like cleaning the dishes.

The original sentence contains repeated words, an incomplete expression, and several clauses joined together without clear structure. Separate the ideas into two complete sentences and use the clearer expression try new activities.

× Yes, they should they should try to different things in her life, especially outside their home. There are a lot of things to do.

✓ Yes, they should try different things in their lives, especially outside their homes. There are a lot of things to do.

The subject is plural, so the possessive pronoun must also be plural: their, not her. When referring to the lives of several people, use their lives.

× Yes, they should they should try to different things in her life, especially outside their home. There are a lot of things to do.

✓ Yes, they should try different things in their lives, especially outside their homes. There are a lot of things to do.

The phrase they should is repeated, and try to different things is incomplete because try should be followed directly by the object different things. The correct structure is they should try different things.