机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: This is a clear, natural, and well-developed answer. You respond directly, provide specific categories of activities, and use linking words such as “although.” To make the answer more specific and effective, mention one particular activity and explain briefly what you learned from it. This would make your supporting details more vivid and personal.

範例: Yes, definitely. My parents encouraged me to try different activities when I was young, especially sports and school clubs. For example, I joined a swimming class for two years, and it helped me become more disciplined and confident. Although I did not continue every activity, those experiences helped me discover my interests.

建議: The answer has a clear opinion and a balanced explanation. The linking word “however” is used effectively, and the vocabulary is relevant. However, the final sentence is incomplete: “focus on” needs an object, such as “focus on the activities they genuinely enjoy.” You could also add one specific example or result to make the answer more concrete while keeping it within four or five sentences.

範例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. Doing so helps them leave their comfort zone, discover their strengths, and learn from experience. However, they do not need to try everything; after exploring several options, they should focus on the activities they genuinely enjoy. For example, someone might try different sports before deciding to concentrate on tennis.

× It's better to explore a few things genuinely and focus on.

✓ It's better to explore a few things genuinely and focus on them.

The phrasal verb focus on requires an object. The sentence is incomplete because on is followed by no noun or pronoun. Use them to refer to the few things mentioned earlier.