机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in the past tense: use “I had the chance” instead of “I have a chance.” Correct article and plural errors, such as “new activities” rather than “a new activities,” and say “It was a wonderful time” instead of “It’s very wonderful time.” Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason clearly, and add one specific detail about when or how you did these activities. Avoid repeating “time” and “enjoy.”

範例: Yes, I had the chance to try several new activities as a child, such as running and playing the guitar. My parents encouraged me to explore my interests because they wanted me to discover my talents. I especially enjoyed playing the guitar after school, although I eventually focused more on running.

建議: State your opinion naturally by saying “try as many different things as possible” rather than “try everything things as they can.” Include the article in “a good opportunity,” and use plural forms such as “skills.” The example about Thai people is too general and is not clearly connected to the main idea; replace it with a specific personal or realistic example. Begin “For example” with a capital letter and use linking words to make the answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible. This gives them a good opportunity to discover their interests and develop a wider range of skills. For example, someone who joins a sports club might discover a talent for teamwork, while learning a musical instrument can improve their concentration. Even if they do not enjoy every activity, they can learn something valuable from the experience.

× Yes when I was a child I have a chance to try a new activities like running and playing guitar this is because my parents support me to find my talent.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a chance to try a new activity, such as running and playing the guitar, because my parents supported me in finding my talent.

The original contains several independent clauses joined without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction, which makes it a run-on sentence. Use commas and a conjunction such as because to connect the ideas clearly.

× I have a chance to try a new activities ... my parents support me ...

✓ I had a chance to try a new activity ... my parents supported me ...

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of have and supported instead of support.

× a new activities

✓ a new activity

The article a can only be used with a singular countable noun. Therefore, activities must be changed to the singular form activity.

× playing guitar

✓ playing the guitar

When referring to a musical instrument in this context, English normally uses the definite article the before the instrument: playing the guitar.

× I think it's very wonderful time and I really enjoy.

✓ I think it was a very wonderful time, and I really enjoyed it.

The experience happened in the past, so use was and enjoyed. The object it should also be added after enjoyed to show what the student enjoyed.

× it's very wonderful time

✓ it was a very wonderful time

Wonderful time is a singular countable noun phrase, so it needs the indefinite article a. The phrase should be a very wonderful time.

× people should try everything things as they can

✓ people should try as many different things as they can

When referring to a large number of countable plural nouns, use the structure as many ... as. Everything cannot be followed by the plural noun things in this structure.

× it's good opportunity to find their talent

✓ it's a good opportunity to find their talent

Opportunity is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a: a good opportunity.

× most of Thai people often try a new activity

✓ most Thai people often try a new activity

Do not use of before a nationality adjective when referring to people generally. The natural structure is most Thai people, not most of Thai people.

× to develop their skill

✓ to develop their skills

The pronoun their refers to people in general, so the plural noun skills is more grammatically appropriate. Each person may develop multiple skills.