机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Use the correct expression “take part in,” and provide a specific childhood example with a reason or result. Also, use the plural “opportunities” or say “an opportunity” accurately.

範例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I took part in a school drama club and learned how to perform in front of an audience. I really enjoyed it because it helped me become more confident.

建議: Give your opinion directly rather than repeating the question. Support your view with a clear reason and, if possible, a brief example or qualification. Use a linking word such as “because,” “although,” or “as a result” to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I think people should try a wide range of activities because this helps them discover their interests and strengths. For example, someone who tries volunteering, sports, and music may find a talent they did not know they had. However, they should focus on a few activities they genuinely enjoy rather than trying everything at once.

× Did you have any opportunity to take a park in new activities at a trial?

✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

The question asks about possible experiences in general, so the plural noun opportunities is more appropriate after any. The fixed expression is take part in, not take a park in. Also, as a child correctly matches the meaning and setting of the examiner's question.

× Did you have any opportunity to take a park in new activities at a trial?

✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

The preposition at is incorrect in this context. The phrase as a child refers to the period of life when the activities took place. Use take part in when describing participation in an activity.