机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你没有直接回答考官的问题，而是重复并改写了问题。首先要明确回答“有”或“没有”，然后补充具体活动、时间和感受。注意使用过去时，例如“Did you have...”应回答“I did”或“I didn’t”；此外，“take part in your activities”表达不自然，应说“take part in new activities”。建议用2至4句话完整作答，并使用“for example”连接细节。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was about ten, I took part in a school swimming club and learned how to swim properly. It was challenging at first, but I became more confident after a few weeks.

建議: 你只是重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点。应先直接回答“是”或“不是”，再说明原因，并提供一个具体例子。可以使用“because”“for example”或“as a result”来组织答案。回答控制在2至4句话，避免只重复题目。

範例: Yes, I think people should try different things whenever possible. It helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone who tries photography may find a creative hobby that they really enjoy.

× Do you have any opportunity to take part in your activities as a child

✓ Did you have any opportunity to take part in your activities as a child?

“As a child”表示过去的时间，因此应该使用一般过去时。将一般现在时“Do you have”改为一般过去时“Did you have”。

× Do you have any opportunity to take part in your activities as a child

✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in your activities as a child?

“Any”后面可以接可数名词复数，表示“任何一些机会”。在这个语境中，通常应使用复数“opportunities”，而不是单数“opportunity”。