机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本涉及了足球和绘画比赛，但语法错误较多，且没有清晰说明这些活动是否是童年时参加的。应先直接回答“Yes, I did”，然后使用正确的动词形式，例如“take part in”应改为“took part in”，并用连接词补充具体细节，如参加的频率、感受或收获。注意使用小写的“drawing”，并避免不自然的“have some activities”表达。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I took part in football games and drawing competitions at school. I especially enjoyed football because it helped me make new friends and become more confident.

建議: 这个回答没有完整表达观点，句子在“may not”处中断，因此无法清楚回答是否应该尝试不同的事情。应先明确表态，例如“I think people should try different things”，然后说明原因并提供例子。注意避免重复主语结构“people initially they”，并使用连接词如“because”“for example”来组织答案。

範例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. This is because different experiences can help them discover their interests and strengths. For example, someone who tries cooking, sports, or music may find a talent they did not know they had.

× Actually, I have some activities such as take part in the football games and Drawing competitions.

✓ Actually, I had some activities such as taking part in football games and drawing competitions.

问题发生在“as a child”这一过去时间范围内，因此应将现在时“have”改为过去时“had”。回答有关童年经历的问题时，通常要使用一般过去时。

× Actually, I have some activities such as take part in the football games and Drawing competitions.

✓ Actually, I had some activities such as taking part in football games and drawing competitions.

“such as”后面通常接名词或动名词。这里“take part in”表示一种活动，应改为动名词“taking part in”。另外，活动名称“drawing”在句中不需要大写。

× From my perspective, I think that people initially they may not

✓ From my perspective, I think that people may not initially try as many different things as they can.

在“that”引导的从句中，“people”已经是主语，后面不能再使用“they”重复作主语。应删除“they”。同时，原句没有完整表达“可能不会尝试很多不同的事情”，所以补充“try as many different things as they can”使句子完整。

× From my perspective, I think that people initially they may not

✓ From my perspective, I think that people may not initially try as many different things as they can.

原句存在主语重复，并且在“may not”后没有完整的主要动词，导致句子结构不完整。情态动词“may”后面必须接动词原形，因此应使用“may not initially try”。回答口语问题时，要确保句子包含完整的主语、谓语和必要的宾语。