机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, ngữ pháp và cấu trúc sai nhiều. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ, và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động, thời điểm, cảm xúc, kết quả). Đồng thời sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, danh từ, mạo từ) và rút gọn câu để không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined the school drama club when I was ten, which helped me overcome my shyness. Also, I tried painting and swimming, and each activity taught me different skills and boosted my confidence.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý hay nhưng diễn đạt thiếu chính xác và rối. Cần nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối ý, và giải thích cụ thể vì sao (ví dụ: học kỹ năng mới, mở rộng tầm nhìn). Sửa ngữ pháp (plural, verb forms, possessive) và tránh lỗi lặp từ/đứt quãng.

範例: Yes, I believe people should try many different things because it helps them learn new skills and gain confidence. For instance, trying team sports can improve communication, while learning an instrument can boost patience and focus.

× I think, I think yes, I am.

✓ I think so, yes.

The original is ungrammatical and contains redundancies and an incorrect use of the verb to be. The phrase 'I think so, yes' is concise and fits the context. Suggestion: remove repeated words and unnecessary auxiliary verbs; use 'I think so' to express agreement.

× I have an opportunity as a chance in the in the stage.

✓ I had opportunities to perform on stage.

The original has incorrect word order and article use ('an opportunity as a chance' and duplicate 'the in the stage'). The question asks about childhood opportunities, so past tense 'had' is appropriate. Use the plural 'opportunities' if implying more than one. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases ('opportunities to perform on stage') and correct past tense.

× Yes, I I think yes, because if people try many different thing, it's make me. Develop confident and say again experience.

✓ Yes, I think so, because if people try many different things, it helps me develop confidence and gain experience.

Multiple issues: repetition ('I I'), singular/plural ('different thing' -> 'different things'), incorrect verb forms ('it's make me' -> 'it helps me'), punctuation and sentence fragmentation. Also tense/aspect: use present simple 'helps' for general truths. Suggestions: remove repetitions, use plural for countable nouns, use correct verb 'help(s) + object + verb (base form)' and combine fragments into one sentence.