机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (tense and article use), pronunciation of key words, and clarity by giving one clear topic sentence followed by a specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I joined a basketball team when I was a child. It gave me the chance to be part of a group and taught me how to cooperate and work hard with others.

建議: Make your main opinion clear in one sentence, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Fix vague vocabulary and grammar (use 'knowledge or skills' instead of 'knowledge or rulers', and 'in different situations' instead of 'from different scenes'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'for example' to organize your answer.

範例: Yes, I believe people should try many different things because it helps them gain new skills and perspectives. For example, trying teamwork, public speaking, or volunteer work can improve confidence and teach practical problem-solving.

× Of course I joined a basket team when I am as a child.

✓ Of course I joined a basketball team when I was a child.

The sentence describes a past event, so past-tense forms must be used. 'am' is present tense and incorrect here; it should be 'was'. Also 'basket team' is not idiomatic; use 'basketball team'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for time clauses ('when I was a child').

× It's an opportunity to to be a part of a team and work hard together.

✓ It was an opportunity to be part of a team and to work hard together.

The context is past, so 'It is' should be 'It was'. There is a repeated word 'to to' which is a typo. 'Be part of' is more natural than 'be a part of' but both are acceptable; keep parallel infinitives by adding 'to' before 'work'. Suggestion: correct tense, remove duplicate 'to', and maintain parallel structure for infinitives.

× From my perspective, I think people need to do it because they can learn a lot no matter knowledge or rulers from different scenes and these things come for themselves.

✓ From my perspective, I think people should try many different things because they can learn a lot, whether it is knowledge or skills from different situations, and these benefits will come to them.

Several issues: modal verb choice and tense ('need to do it' is awkward; 'should try' fits recommendation questions better), incorrect phrase 'no matter knowledge or rulers from different scenes' is ungrammatical — likely meant 'whether it is knowledge or skills from different situations'. 'Rulers' is wrong word choice. 'Come for themselves' is incorrect; use 'come to them' or 'benefits will come to them'. Suggestions: use appropriate modal 'should', correct vocabulary ('skills' not 'rulers'), use 'whether' to introduce alternatives, and ensure idiomatic phrase 'come to them'.