机会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ нужно сделать более естественным и грамматически правильным. Используйте простое утверждение в начале, затем одно-два дополнительных пояснения. Избегайте лишних слов и ошибок времени/формы глагола. Например, замените «have opportunities to take apart» на «had opportunities to try»; используйте правильные формы глаголов («preferred» или «used to prefer», «go for walks»). Также добавьте связующее слово, если даёте дополнительную информацию.

範例: Yes, I had the chance to try new activities as a child. However, I usually preferred playing video games or going for walks with my parents and friends, because those activities were relaxing and easy to organize.

建議: Нужно дать чёткий основной ответ, затем привести одно-два связных и конкретных объяснения. Исправьте грамматику: используйте «should», согласование подлежащего и сказуемого, отрицательные формы и модальные глаголы правильно (например, «if it doesn’t cause problems»). Применяйте связующие слова (however, for example) и конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ логичным и информативным.

範例: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them discover new interests and skills. However, they should avoid activities that cause serious problems, for example dangerous sports or classes that are too expensive or stressful.

× Yes, I have opportunities to take apart new activities but I prefer to play video games or walk walked out with my parents or my friends.

✓ Yes, I had opportunities to take part in new activities, but I preferred to play video games or go for walks with my parents or my friends.

The sentence has multiple tense and verb form problems. 'I have opportunities' should be past tense 'I had' to match 'as a child'. 'take apart' is incorrect; the correct verb phrase is 'take part in' meaning to participate. 'prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' to match the time frame. 'walk walked out' is ungrammatical; use 'go for walks' or 'walk with'. Also use the preposition 'in' after 'take part'. Suggestion: determine the time frame (past), make verbs consistent in past tense, use correct phrasal verbs 'take part in' and 'go for walks'.

× I think yeah people need to try many different things but if it don't make trouble for them for example if you go to the art classes, they don't can make trouble.

✓ I think, yes, people need to try many different things, but if it doesn't cause trouble for them. For example, if you go to art classes, they won't cause trouble.

This sentence has errors with modal and auxiliary verbs and subject-verb agreement. 'don't' is incorrect for third person singular; use 'doesn't'. The phrase 'don't can make trouble' mixes auxiliary verbs incorrectly; use 'won't cause trouble' or 'won't cause problems'. Also the conditional structure is unclear; separate the general condition and the example. Suggestion: use correct third person singular 'doesn't', avoid stacking modals, and use appropriate verbs like 'cause' or 'create' with 'trouble'.