疲惫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然且语法正确。请在开头直接给出主题句，然后补充具体原因并用适当的时态和连词。注意时态一致（现在完成或现在一般），避免拼写和语序错误，控制在最多5句之内。

範例: Yes, I often feel tired since I started university. The workload is much heavier now, and I usually spend long hours in lectures and studying. As a result, I frequently feel low on energy by the evening.

建議: 回答内容具体且有例子，但时态混用（有现在完成、现在一般和过去时）和句子较长。建议使用连接词使结构更清晰，保持时态一致，并将信息分成两到三句以增强流畅性和自然度。

範例: I usually feel tired in the evenings because university keeps me busy with lectures and assignments. I often have to study after I get back to my accommodation, so by night I feel exhausted. For instance, I sometimes work until midnight to finish coursework.

建議: 学生给出了动作，但原始回答缺失且说明部分以评语形式出现。建议直接回答并详细说明每个做法的原因和频率，使用连接词并控制在最多5句内，使答案更完整自然。

範例: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap for about 20 minutes to recharge. After that, I often eat something I enjoy, like fruit or a snack, which helps lift my mood and energy. If I'm still tired, I go for a short walk to wake up.

× Yes after I enter the university school I always got tired

✓ Yes. After I entered university, I always got tired.

问题类型：过去时错误。该句中存在时态混用（先用一般现在时 enter，再用过去时 got）。因为说话者指的是“进入大学之后”的过去事件，句子应使用过去式 entered，而后半句用 always got 也符合过去习惯。但原句“the university school”不自然，改为“university”。建议：叙述过去已发生且持续一段时间的事件时，统一使用过去时态，并使用地道表达。

× After I started university, I have been extremely busy with lectures and assignments so I often don't have time to rest and I felt exhausted.

✓ After I started university, I have been extremely busy with lectures and assignments, so I often don't have time to rest and feel exhausted.

问题类型：过去时与现在完成时混用导致时态不一致。句首的 started 是过去时，接着用现在完成时 have been 表示从过去持续到现在，这本身可以，但句末使用 felt（过去式）与前文的现在完成时冲突。因为说话者意指直到现在仍感到疲惫，应使用现在时或现在完成时的结果用法，故将 felt 改为 feel 或省略并用现在时态表达持续状态。建议：当使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的情况时，后续描述也应使用现在时态以保持一致。

× For example, every night when I return to my student accommodation, I still need to study which makes me very tired.

✓ For example, every night when I return to my student accommodation, I still need to study, which makes me very tired.

问题类型：动词+ -ing 形式/句子结构错误。原句缺少逗号，导致定语从句与先行词分隔不清。结构上“which makes me very tired”是对整句话的结果说明，应与前半句用逗号分开。另外此句时态与上下文用现在时一致，动词形式无须变化。建议：使用非限制性定语从句时在前面加逗号，以提高句子清晰度。

× Good job! - You answered the question directly and gave two actions you take when tired (taking a short nap and eating something you enjoy).

✓ When I'm tired, I usually take a short nap or eat something I enjoy.

问题类型：句子结构错误。原文“Good job!”及说明不是学生对问题的回答，且列举行为的表达不符合口语直接回答的格式。应直接回答“当我累的时候我会做什么”，使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，并用连词或并列结构列出两个动作。建议：回答习惯性行为时使用一般现在时，并用简单并列结构（or/and）清晰列出动作。