疲惫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No often), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như “I'm feel” → “I feel” và sắp xếp trật tự từ (stress, exercises, fever).

範例: Not often. I usually feel tired when I am under a lot of stress, for example during exam periods when I have many assignments. I also get very tired if I have a fever.

建議: Cần dùng từ đúng (không dùng “exotic”) và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu thời điểm, sau đó giải thích nguyên nhân cụ thể. Thêm liên từ để liên kết ý (because, when, so) và chú ý chia động từ (I do → I have to do, I not have → I don't have).

範例: I usually feel tired when I overwork at school because I have many assignments to do and not enough time to finish them, so I become very stressed.

建議: Cần sử dụng cụm từ phù hợp (ví dụ “wiped out” thay vì “wipe out”) và cấu trúc gọn trong tối đa 5 câu. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu hành động chính, rồi nêu 1–2 hoạt động cụ thể bạn làm để phục hồi. Tránh lặp từ (“spend my time spend that time”).

範例: When I feel wiped out, I usually rest and avoid doing anything stressful. I take a short nap, drink water, and do simple self-care like taking a warm shower or reading a book to relax.

× Not often I'm feel tired when I stress all my exercise and all when I have a fever is make me very stressed and very tired.

✓ Not often. I feel tired when I am stressed, when I have a lot of exercises, or when I have a fever; those situations make me very stressed and very tired.

The sentence has multiple present tense and verb form errors. 'I'm feel' is incorrect; use 'I feel' or 'I'm tired'. 'When I stress' should be 'when I am stressed' (passive/ adjective form). 'All my exercise' is unclear; use 'a lot of exercises' or 'many exercises'. 'Is make me' is incorrect verb agreement and structure; use 'those situations make me'. Suggestion: keep present simple for general statements (I feel), use 'be' + adjective for states (I am stressed), and ensure subject-verb agreement ('situations make').

× I feel exotic when I overwork at the school. I have many exercise to do but I not have many time to finish it so I feel very stressed.

✓ I feel exhausted when I overwork at school. I have many exercises to do but I do not have enough time to finish them, so I feel very stressed.

'Exotic' is the wrong word; use 'exhausted' to mean very tired. 'At the school' is usually 'at school' for general activity. 'Many exercise' should be plural 'many exercises'. 'I not have' needs auxiliary 'do' in present simple: 'I do not have'. 'Many time' should be 'enough time' or 'much time' and 'finish it' should match plural 'them'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary, use plural nouns with plural verb references, and use do-support for negatives in present simple.

× When I wipe out I don't want to do anything else. I only want to take a rest and spend my time spend that time for self-care.

✓ When I am wiped out, I don't want to do anything else. I only want to rest and spend that time on self-care.

'Wipe out' as adjective requires passive participle 'wiped out' or use 'I am wiped out'. 'Take a rest' is acceptable but 'rest' is more natural. 'Spend my time spend that time' is repetitive; use 'spend that time on'. Preposition 'on' is required with 'spend time on something'. Suggestion: use correct participle forms for states, avoid repetition, and use correct prepositions ('spend time on').