礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer in the past tense because you are describing childhood: use “grew up” and “taught me.” Your response becomes difficult to follow because several ideas are joined without clear punctuation, and the final sentence is unfinished. State who taught you and give one specific example of what they taught you.

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother and grandmother. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to greet older people respectfully. If I behaved badly, they would remind me to apologize.

建議: Give a direct answer and explain one clear benefit. Avoid repeating vague phrases such as “a lot of stuff,” and use the correct structure “being polite is,” not “being polite it is.” Finish your thought with a specific example, such as resolving a disagreement calmly.

範例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people communicate respectfully. For example, a calm and courteous response can prevent a small disagreement from turning into a bigger conflict.

建議: The question asks about occasions, so give a clear answer such as “in everyday situations” or name particular settings. Correct the word order to “people should always be polite” and say “being polite can prevent conflicts.” The phrase “people are very sick” is unclear; explain what you mean or remove it.

範例: We should be polite in all kinds of situations, especially at work, at school, and when speaking to strangers. Being respectful can prevent misunderstandings and make difficult conversations less stressful.

建議: You give relevant examples, but answer in the past tense because the question is about your childhood. Replace general advice (“you need to”) with what you personally did, and clarify the final point: you greeted your elders rather than saying “they thank you.” Use linking words to connect your examples smoothly.

範例: As a child, I tried to show politeness by saying “please” and “thank you.” I also apologized when I made a mistake and greeted my elders whenever I saw them. My family taught me that these small gestures show respect.

× When I grow up, throughout my childhood, my grandma and my parents were at home only my dad worked and my mom and my grandma taught me everything that I know. Also the politeness.

✓ When I was growing up, my grandma and my parents were at home. Only my dad worked, and my mom and grandma taught me everything I knew, including how to be polite.

The answer describes the speaker's childhood, so the past-tense form was growing up is needed instead of grow up. Knew also keeps the verb tense consistent with the past-time story. Use past tense when describing completed experiences from childhood.

× When I grow up, throughout my childhood, my grandma and my parents were at home only my dad worked and my mom and my grandma taught me everything that I know. Also the politeness.

✓ When I was growing up, my grandma and my parents were at home. Only my dad worked, and my mom and grandma taught me everything I knew, including how to be polite.

The original combines several independent clauses without clear punctuation, and Also the politeness is an incomplete phrase. Separate the clauses with appropriate punctuation and connect the final idea to the main sentence.

× Of course, being polite it is very important because, uh, a lot of things can be. Solved by being polite and a lot of prob and a lot of stuff.

✓ Of course, being polite is very important because a lot of things can be solved by being polite, and it can help with many problems.

Being polite is the subject, so the extra it makes the sentence structure incorrect. Also, can be and solved belong together in the passive verb phrase can be solved; they should not be separated by a full stop. Avoid ending with an incomplete or unclear phrase.

× In my opinion, people always be should be polite every day of their life, because as I said before, being polite so a lot of conflicts and prevent misunderstandings.

✓ In my opinion, people should always be polite every day of their lives because, as I said before, being polite can resolve many conflicts and prevent misunderstandings.

Should is a modal verb and must come before the base form be. The original places be before should, creating an incorrect verb sequence. Put should before be when expressing advice or obligation.

× In my opinion, people always be should be polite every day of their life, because as I said before, being polite so a lot of conflicts and prevent misunderstandings.

✓ In my opinion, people should always be polite every day of their lives because, as I said before, being polite can resolve many conflicts and prevent misunderstandings.

People is plural, so the matching possessive phrase is their lives, not their life. Make the noun plural when it refers to the lives of multiple people.

× In my opinion, people always be should be polite every day of their life, because as I said before, being polite so a lot of conflicts and prevent misunderstandings.

✓ In my opinion, people should always be polite every day of their lives because, as I said before, being polite can resolve many conflicts and prevent misunderstandings.

The clause beginning with being polite has no main verb before the phrase about conflicts. Adding can resolve gives the clause a complete verb phrase. Use a complete subject-and-verb structure to express the result of being polite.