礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答有基本观点，但存在多处影响理解的词汇和语法错误。应直接说明“父母教我礼貌”，并使用“be polite to older people”和“show respect”等准确表达。“pilot”应改为“polite”，“suggest”可能想表达“respect”。建议加入一个具体行为，例如打招呼、说谢谢或让长辈先坐，并使用because连接原因。

範例: When I was a child, my mother taught me to be polite to older people. She often reminded me to greet them properly and use polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” In China, showing respect to older people is considered very important.

建議: 回答了问题并给出原因，但“polished”应改为“polite”，“leave a good pressure”应改为“form a good impression”。结尾重复“Yes”，使表达不够自然。建议补充礼貌如何帮助人际交往，例如让别人更愿意与你交流，并使用清晰的因果结构。

範例: Yes, I think being polite is extremely important because it helps us build a good impression. When we speak respectfully and listen to others, they are more likely to trust us and enjoy talking to us. It also helps prevent unnecessary misunderstandings.

建議: 回答方向基本正确，但句子结构不完整，且“face to”应改为“meet”或“talk to”，“placed”应改为“polite”。不要只谈长辈，也可以提到正式场合、学校、工作场所和第一次见面。建议使用“especially when”引出场合，并给出具体礼貌行为，如使用敬语、认真倾听和避免打断。

範例: We should be polite whenever we meet older people, especially in formal situations or family gatherings. We should also be respectful at school, at work, and when meeting someone for the first time. For example, we can greet people properly, listen carefully, and avoid interrupting them.

建議: 回答内容切题，并提供了两个具体例子，因此内容较好。主要问题是时态不一致：谈过去应使用“always said”，而不是“always say”；“if we make some mistakes”应改为“if I made a mistake”。建议用“for example”自然连接两个行为，并避免在句首同时使用“well”和“for example”造成拖沓。

範例: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “thank you” whenever someone gave me something. I also apologized whenever I made a mistake. In addition, I tried to greet adults respectfully when I visited their homes.

× Well, when I was a child, my mother always told me I should be pilot to suggest or some older generation because in our countries, in China, everybody should be pilots.

✓ Well, when I was a child, my mother always told me that I should be polite to older generations because, in China, everyone should be polite.

原句中“to suggest or some older generation”结构不完整，句意也不清楚。表达“对长辈有礼貌”时，应使用“be polite to + 人”。另外，“everyone”表示每个人，后面应使用单数形式“should be polite”，不能使用“pilots”。

× Yes, I think being polished is so significant because if you are polite that others will leave a good pressure for you. Yes.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because if you are polite, others will have a good impression of you.

“polished”表示“精致的、完美的”，不符合这里“有礼貌”的意思，应改为“polite”。“pressure”表示“压力”，不能表达“他人对你的好印象”；这里应使用“a good impression”。

× Yes, I think being polished is so significant because if you are polite that others will leave a good pressure for you. Yes.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because if you are polite, others will have a good impression of you.

“because if...”引导条件从句时，条件从句后需要用逗号与主句分开。原句“if you are polite that others...”结构错误，应改为“if you are polite, others will...”。建议熟悉“if + 条件，主句”的基本结构。

× Well I think if we face to some elders we should be placed because respect and the love elders in our country is so important and I think everyone should do

✓ Well, I think if we meet some elders, we should be polite because respect for and love of elders are very important in our country, and I think everyone should do so.

“face to”不是表达“遇到某人”的正确搭配，应使用“meet someone”或“face someone”。表达“对长辈的尊重和爱”时，应使用“respect for elders”和“love of elders”。

× Well I think if we face to some elders we should be placed because respect and the love elders in our country is so important and I think everyone should do

✓ Well, I think if we meet some elders, we should be polite because respect for and love of elders are very important in our country, and I think everyone should do so.

主语“respect and love”由两个并列名词组成，表示复数概念，因此谓语应使用“are”，不能使用“is”。注意判断主语的单复数，再选择“is”或“are”。

× Well I think if we face to some elders we should be placed because respect and the love elders in our country is so important and I think everyone should do

✓ Well, I think if we meet some elders, we should be polite because respect for and love of elders are very important in our country, and I think everyone should do so.

原句最后的“everyone should do”没有完整表达“做什么”，句子不完整。这里应使用“do so”代替前面提到的行为，表示“这样做”。同时，应在句首和条件从句后使用逗号，使句子结构更清晰。

× Well, when I was a child for example, if someone gave me something, I always say thank you and if we make some mistakes, I always say sorry.

✓ Well, when I was a child, for example, if someone gave me something, I always said thank you, and if I made a mistake, I always said sorry.

“when I was a child”说明这是过去的经历，因此主句中的“say”应改为过去式“said”，“make”应改为“made”。描述过去经常发生的行为时，相关动词通常都使用过去时。

× Well, when I was a child for example, if someone gave me something, I always say thank you and if we make some mistakes, I always say sorry.

✓ Well, when I was a child, for example, if someone gave me something, I always said thank you, and if I made a mistake, I always said sorry.

前面主语是“I”，后面突然改成“we”，指代不一致。这里是在描述学生自己的童年经历，所以应使用“I”。另外，“a mistake”与“I”保持单数一致，表达“犯了一个错误”。