礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本没有完整表达清楚。你应该先直接说明学习礼貌的主要来源，例如父母和老师；然后补充他们教你的具体行为，如说“please”和“thank you”、尊重长辈等。注意避免停顿、重复和无关表达，并使用完整句子。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to listen carefully when other people were speaking. They also reminded me to respect older people and help others when necessary.

建議: 你表达了明确观点，但后半句不完整，而且“the plight decided you're attitude”存在词汇和语法错误。可以说“Politeness affects your attitude and the way other people see you”。建议用“because”引出一个具体原因，并完成整句话。

範例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it affects the way other people see you. When you are polite, people are more likely to trust you and communicate with you comfortably. It also helps prevent unnecessary misunderstandings.

建議: 回答抓住了“对长辈有礼貌”这一点，但表达不自然，且“because”重复，最后一句不完整。应先概括礼貌适用的场合，再给出具体例子，例如与长辈交谈、在学校或工作场所交流时。可以使用“for example”和“especially”来连接细节。

範例: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially older people. For example, in Chinese culture, we usually use respectful language when speaking to our grandparents or teachers. We should also be polite at school and in the workplace because good manners make communication easier.

建議: 这个回答无法辨认出完整意思，因此几乎没有回答问题。你需要使用清晰、完整的句子说明童年时做过的具体事情，例如向长辈问好、说谢谢、帮父母做家务或给别人让路。建议提前准备两到三个简单的例子，并注意发音清楚。

範例: As a child, I showed my politeness by greeting my relatives whenever they visited us. I also said “thank you” when someone helped me and offered my seat to older people on public transport. My parents were happy because these small actions showed respect.

× My parents and teachers told me how to treat everyone whenever.

✓ My parents and teachers told me how to treat everyone.

“Whenever”通常引导一个完整的时间或条件从句，后面需要主语和谓语，例如“whenever I met someone”。原句中的“whenever”没有完整从句，因此应删除。

× It's the most important because the plight decided your attitude.

✓ I think it's very important because politeness determines your attitude.

这里谈论的是礼貌的一般作用，应使用一般现在时。“decided”是过去式，改为“determines”。另外，“the plight”不符合语境，应该使用“politeness”。

× It's the most important because the plight decided you're attitude.

✓ I think it's very important because politeness determines your attitude.

“you're”是“you are”的缩写，不能放在名词“attitude”前面表示所属关系。这里需要形容词性物主代词“your”。

× In the occasions with older people we need to be polite.

✓ On occasions involving older people, we need to be polite.

表示“在某些场合”时，通常使用介词“on”，而不是“in”。“involving older people”比“with older people”更自然地表达“涉及老年人的场合”。

× We need to be polite because because in Chinese traditional culture less is must be.

✓ We need to be polite because, in traditional Chinese culture, this is considered necessary.

“because”被重复使用了一次，应保留一个。此外，原句后半部分结构不完整，不能表达清楚的原因，因此改为完整句子“this is considered necessary”。

× In Chinese traditional culture less is must be.

✓ In traditional Chinese culture, we must be polite to older people.

情态动词“must”后面必须接动词原形，不能使用“is must be”这样的结构。这里用“we must be polite”清楚表达“我们必须有礼貌”。

× Kolo Auntie and Uncle Seahi and Justice Lisan Hua Lee Old M.

✓ I greeted my aunts and uncles and showed them respect.

原句主要由无法辨认的词语组成，缺少清晰的主语、谓语和完整句意。回答“What did you do”时，需要使用“主语 + 过去式谓语”的完整结构，例如“I greeted ... and showed ...”。