礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сформулируйте предложение ясно и грамматически правильно: укажите субъект и действие, используйте прошедшее время и конкретные примеры. Избегайте лишних слов и повторов, дайте одну-две конкретные детали о том, что именно делала мама (например, учила говорить «пожалуйста» и «спасибо» или показывала пример своим поведением).

範例: My mother taught me to be polite when I was a child. She always reminded me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ and showed polite behaviour by being calm and respectful to others.

建議: Используйте правильные грамматические формы и свяжите идеи логически: начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Замените неточные формулировки («can to do day better») на конкретные объяснения влияния в обществе или на работу.

範例: Yes, I think being polite is very important in today’s world because it helps build good relationships and makes daily interactions smoother. For example, saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ can create a friendly atmosphere at work or school.

建議: Дайте прямой и сдержанный ответ, затем уточните с 1–2 конкретными примерами ситуаций. Избегайте тавтологии и общих фраз. Используйте связки (for example, such as, especially) чтобы структурировать ответ.

範例: We should be polite in most social situations. For example, it is important to be polite when meeting someone for the first time, speaking with teachers or colleagues, and when asking for help.

建議: Ответьте конкретно в прошедшем времени и перечислите 2–3 конкретных поступка. Используйте связки для плавности и избегайте слов-паразитов. Исправьте неверные слова (например, «Paulina's») и говорите простыми понятными фразами.

範例: As a child, I showed politeness by saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ and apologising when I made mistakes. I also helped adults by carrying small items and listening carefully when they spoke.

× My mom raised me she did a lot of things to polite me and I really am saying my mom for she do it in the past.

✓ My mom raised me. She did a lot of things to teach me politeness, and I am really grateful to my mom for what she did in the past.

The original is a run-on with incorrect verb forms and word choices. Split into two sentences and use correct verbs: 'teach me politeness' instead of 'to polite me'; 'grateful to my mom' instead of 'saying my mom'; 'for what she did' instead of 'for she do it'. Suggestion: break long clauses into separate sentences and use appropriate verbs and prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Personally, I think that be polite is really important in modern world because it can to do day better.

✓ Personally, I think that being polite is really important in the modern world because it can make the day better.

Missing gerund 'being' and incorrect article use 'the modern world'. 'Can to do' is incorrect — use 'can make' or 'makes'. Also 'day' needs an article or quantifier. Suggestion: use 'being polite', include 'the' before 'modern world', and use correct verb 'make'. Grammar problem type ID:17

× It's really easy to say please or thank you, but it's really grateful.

✓ It's really easy to say 'please' or 'thank you', and it's really appreciated.

'Grateful' describes a person, not an action; 'appreciated' describes how the action is received. Use an adjective or passive participle appropriately. Suggestion: use 'appreciated' to express that politeness is valued. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Personally, I think that we should be polite in every situation in every time we should to be polite and I think that don't matter in what occasion we was.

✓ Personally, I think that we should be polite in every situation and at all times; it doesn't matter on what occasion we are.

Several pronoun and auxiliary errors: 'every time' should be 'at all times'; 'we should to be polite' has extra 'to'; 'don't matter' should be 'it doesn't matter'; 'in what occasion we was' needs preposition 'on', correct tense 'are', and correct subject. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use correct auxiliaries and prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Personally, I remember that I say thank you. I say please sorry to show politeness as a child.

✓ Personally, I remember that I said 'thank you'. I said 'please' and 'sorry' to show politeness as a child.

Memories of the past require past-tense verbs: use 'said' not 'say'. Also list the words correctly and include articles or quotes. Suggestion: use past tense when describing past behavior. Grammar problem type ID:5

× And I think that's kid can do a lot of things to, uh, Paulina's as a child.

✓ And I think that kids can do a lot of things to be polite as children.

Original has pronoun and noun errors: 'that's kid' should be 'kids' or 'a kid'; 'Paulina's' seems to be a typo for 'polite'; 'as a child' should match plural 'kids' or use singular consistently. Suggestion: choose singular or plural and keep pronouns consistent; correct typos. Grammar problem type ID:12