礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子语法和词汇使用有错误，表达不够自然和精确。需要注意时态和单复数（例如 teach -> taught，pilotness -> politeness），以及用更自然的表达来说明父母以身作则。可在一句话后加一到两句具体例子，用连接词使结构更连贯。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents, who led by example. For instance, they never used bad language or told rude jokes, so I avoided doing the same. As a result, politeness felt like a normal part of daily life.

建議: 回答内容意图明确但表达混乱、词汇搭配不当（'shows a person's family, teaching'应更具体），代词和结构需要调整。建议用主题句直接回答，再用两个具体原因，用连词连接并提供短例子或结果。

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it reflects a person's upbringing and respect for others. For example, polite behaviour can make a good first impression and help build trust in social or work situations.

建議: 回答有重复词和犹豫语（umm），逻辑表达不够精炼。建議先给出总体观点，然后举两个具体场合并说明原因，避免口头填充词，使用连接词如 'for example' 或 'such as'。

範例: We should be polite on public occasions, especially when we are with strangers. For example, at social events or on public transport, being polite helps avoid misunderstandings and makes interactions more pleasant.

建議: 回答简短且有重复，语言有些不自然（'could you please' 用法与上下文重复）。建议用主题句说明主要方式，再提供具体例子或情境，使用连词让回答更连贯，并注意句子流畅性。

範例: As a child, I showed politeness mainly by using polite phrases like 'please' and 'thank you'. For example, I would say 'Could you please help me?' when asking for help, and always thank people afterwards.

× My parents just teach me pilotness through their own action.

✓ My parents just taught me politeness through their own actions.

问题类型: 5（过去时问题）和27（主谓一致）以及13（词语使用不当）。原句使用现在时 “teach” 与上下文“as a child”不一致，应使用过去时“taught”。“pilotness” 不是正确词，应改为“politeness”。此外“action” 应为复数“actions”以匹配复数主语的多种行为。建议：根据时间参照（小时候）使用过去时，注意使用正确名词拼写，并使名词单复数一致。

× For example, they never say dirty words or dirty jokes, so I won't say that.

✓ For example, they never said dirty words or told dirty jokes, so I didn't say them.

问题类型:5（过去时问题）、8/9（动词形式问题）和12（代词使用）。上下文讲过去的教育，应把现在时改为过去时（never say → never said）。“dirty jokes” 用“told dirty jokes”。之后句子用过去时态与之呼应（I didn't say them），同时代词用法要匹配（that → them 指前面的 words/jokes）。建议：保持时态一致并用正确动词搭配，代词应与可数名词复数一致。

× Yes, absolutely, because I think politeness shows a person's family, teaching and just well enhance her impression on others.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because I think politeness reflects a person's family upbringing and can enhance their impression on others.

问题类型:13（形容/副词使用不当）、26（句子结构）与11（介词搭配）。原句“shows a person's family, teaching” 结构混乱，应为“reflects a person's family upbringing”。“just well enhance her impression” 语序和用词错误，且性别用“her”不够中性，改为“can enhance their impression”。建议：用合适名词短语（family upbringing），使用情态动词（can）表达可能性，并用中性代词或与上下文一致的代词。

× I think we should be polite on public occasions because umm, you're not familiar with people around you so you just need to be polite and the umm keep a distance from them.

✓ I think we should be polite on public occasions because you're not familiar with the people around you, so you should be polite and keep a distance from them.

问题类型:11（介词/冠词使用）、12（代词）、26（句子结构）。原句“on public occasions” 可以保留，但“people around you” 前应加定冠词“the people”。“you just need to be polite and the umm keep a distance” 中“the umm”是口语填充，应删去，“should” 比 “need to” 更适合建议语气，且动词并列要一致（be polite and keep）。建议：去掉多余填充词，使用定冠词“the”并保持动词并列的一致性。

× I always said some polite words such as please, could you please to show my politeness? Yes, just through words.

✓ I always used polite expressions such as 'please' and 'could you' to show my politeness. Yes, just through words.

问题类型:5（过去时问题），8（动词+ing/不定式形式）与26（句子结构）。原句“said some polite words” 更自然为“used polite expressions”。“could you please to show” 中出现多余不定式“to”，应为“could you” 或“不定式 to show 用于目的从句时前面要用 to show my politeness 而不是把 to 接在 could you 后”。同时根据“as a child”使用过去时“always used”。建议：用更自然的短语“used polite expressions”，目的表达用“to + 动词原形”，并保持时态一致。