礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然且内容相关，但存在少量语法和用词问题（如“plate phrases”应为“polite phrases”或“common phrases”），句子略长，可通过一句主题句加一到两句支持细化。建议注意词汇准确性并适当使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

範例: My mother taught me by example. For instance, she always said "thank you" to waiters when they brought our food, and I picked up these polite phrases from her. As a result, being polite became a natural habit for me.

建議: 回答清晰且内容丰富，使用了原因和例子，但句子有点长且可以分成两句以提高流畅度；建议用连接词更自然地衔接观点和例子，并尽量避免重复（如两次表述‘helps’）。

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important. It makes others feel respected and comfortable, and it can also foster a habit of considering people's feelings, which in turn improves teamwork and reduces conflicts at work.

建議: 回答包含具体场景和原因，符合要求。但句子过长且少了连接词，应在场景之间使用逗号或连接词分隔，并给出更具体的短语（如“long-term relationships”）。建议把答案分为主题句和补充说明以增强条理。

範例: We should be polite in formal situations such as meetings or interviews. We should also be polite when meeting strangers, because a good first impression helps with networking and building long-term relationships.

建議: 回答内容具体但存在词汇错误（如“be courtiers”应为“be courteous”），并且用逗号连接了多个从句造成句子过长。建议修正词汇错误，分成两到三句，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

範例: As a child, I said "thank you" several times a day, especially to people who opened doors or delivery workers. My parents encouraged me to be courteous and to respect elders, so I often said "please" and would stand up to offer my seat on the bus.

× I picked up those plate phrases, so politeness soon became a habit.

✓ I picked up those polite phrases, so politeness soon became a habit.

原句中使用了“plate phrases”，应为“polite phrases”（礼貌用语）。这是单词拼写/用词错误，虽然不完全在列出的语法类型中，但与动名词无关。为符合要求，只纠正为正确词汇。建议多注意同音或近似拼写词的辨别。

× being polite not only makes the people you are talking to feel respected and comfortable, but it also helps you develop a lasting habit of considering others' feelings, for example, it can improve teamwork and reduce conflicts at work.

✓ Being polite not only makes the people you are talking to feel respected and comfortable, but it also helps you develop a lasting habit of considering others' feelings; for example, it can improve teamwork and reduce conflicts at work.

原句为复合句，使用逗号连接多个独立分句造成逗号拼接（comma splice）问题，应使用分号或句号分开。此问题属于句子结构/标点连词用法（在给定列表中最接近的是“Incorrect use of prepositions/连词”）。建议使用分号或断句，保持句子清晰。

× I think we should be polite in formal situations for example in meetings or interviews and also when meeting strangers because making a good first impression helps with networking and establishing long term connections.

✓ I think we should be polite in formal situations, for example in meetings or interviews, and also when meeting strangers, because making a good first impression helps with networking and establishing long-term connections.

原句缺少必要的逗号来分隔插入语“for example”和修饰短语“establishing long-term connections”。此外“long term”应连字符作形容词“long-term”。这些属于介词/标点和形容词连接用法问题。建议在插入语两侧加逗号，并用连字符连接复合形容词以提高清晰度。

× When I was a child, I said thank you several times a day, especially to people who open doors for me or to food delivery workers.

✓ When I was a child, I said thank you several times a day, especially to people who opened doors for me or to food delivery workers.

主句为过去时（When I was a child, I said），从句“who open doors for me”应与主句时态一致，改为过去式“opened”。时态不一致会导致时态混乱。建议保持叙述的一致时态。

× My parents taught me to express gratitude and be courtiers to others, I was also reminded to respect elders, so I would say please more often and stand up to offer my seat on the bus.

✓ My parents taught me to express gratitude and be courteous to others. I was also reminded to respect elders, so I would say please more often and stand up to offer my seat on the bus.

原句中“courtiers”用错，正确词为“courteous”（有礼貌的）。此外原句用逗号连接两个独立分句（逗号拼接），应分句或用分号。此处主要为代词/词性误用（在列表中归类为“Incorrect use of pronouns/词语使用错误”）。建议注意形容词与名词的区别，并使用句号或分号分隔独立分句。