礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Используйте ясное и грамматически правильное предложение, называя конкретные способы обучения. Избегайте неправильных форм слов и кратко объясните, кто и как вас учил. Добавьте связку для плавного перехода от факта к детали.

範例: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, they reminded me to say "please" and "thank you" and showed polite behaviour by being courteous to neighbours.

建議: Сформулируйте чёткую тему (да/нет + причина), используйте связующие слова (because, therefore, for example) и исправьте грамматику. Дайте один или два конкретных примера, чтобы обосновать своё мнение, но не расписывайтесь слишком долго.

範例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along. For example, saying "thank you" and apologising when necessary can prevent misunderstandings and show respect.

建議: Отвечайте непосредственно на вопрос, перечисляя конкретные ситуации (например, в гостях, на работе, при знакомстве) и используя связки для перечисления. Избегайте абстрактных утверждений без примеров.

範例: We should be polite in many situations, such as meeting someone for the first time, speaking with teachers or colleagues, and when visiting someone's home. In these situations, polite language helps create a positive impression.

建議: Ответ уместен, но можно добавить дополнительную конкретику и соединительные слова. Назовите конкретные примеры поведения и кратко объясните почему вы так делали.

範例: As a child, I always said "please" and "thank you" to show respect. I also held doors open for others and listened carefully when adults spoke to me.

× So my parents studying me bullied.

✓ So my parents taught me not to bully.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Studying' is incorrect here; use 'taught' for teaching behavior in the past. 'Me bullied' is ungrammatical — the intended meaning is that parents taught the child not to bully others. Use past tense 'taught' to match 'as a child' context and include 'not to' before the verb 'bully'.

× Yeah, I think people like this very important because say thank you, say sorry, respond kindly, and I always say thank you to show respect.

✓ Yeah, I think being polite is very important because people say thank you, say sorry, respond kindly, and I always say thank you to show respect.

The sentence misuses 'people like this' and lacks a clear subject in the clause listing actions. Replace 'people like this' with 'being polite' to answer the question about importance. For the list of actions, include the subject 'people' (or use gerunds) so verbs are correct: 'people say thank you, say sorry, respond kindly'. This preserves present simple general truth. Also ensure parallel structure in the list of actions.

× If we are polite, the world will be a better place.

✓ If we are polite, the world will be a better place.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the first conditional appropriately: present simple in the 'if' clause and 'will' in the result clause. No correction needed.

× I always said thank you and please to show my respect.

✓ I always said 'thank you' and 'please' to show my respect.

The sentence is mostly correct; 'said thank you and please' is acceptable in past tense. For clarity and written form, place 'thank you' and 'please' in quotes or set them off with commas. If the student intends a habitual past action during childhood, past simple 'said' is appropriate. No structural change required.