礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but unclear and unorganized. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence stating who taught you, then add one or two specific examples or methods (use linking words). Keep sentences concise (no more than 4–5). Work on grammar: subject-verb agreement, article use, and smoother phrasing.

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, my mother taught me to say “please” and “thank you,” while my teacher corrected my tone when I spoke in class. As a result, I became more aware of respectful language and manners.

建議: Your answer gives a clear opinion but is repetitive and grammatically shaky. Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, one specific reason with an example, and a concluding remark. Avoid repetition (e.g., “we can we can”). Use correct noun forms and articles.

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps build good relationships. For instance, speaking calmly and respectfully can defuse tense situations with angry people. Overall, being polite makes daily interactions smoother and more pleasant.

× Especially we learn good things and politeness from our parents, our teachers, whoever elder than us, they can teach they will teach us how to be polite as a child in child we are very don't have a lot that kind of

✓ Especially, we learn good things and politeness from our parents, our teachers, and whoever is older than us; they can teach us how to be polite when we are children because we do not have much of that kind of knowledge.

Multiple pronoun and clause errors: 'whoever elder than us' should be 'whoever is older than us' (missing verb and incorrect comparative form). Repeated pronouns 'they can teach they will teach' should be simplified to 'they can teach us'. 'As a child in child' is incorrect; use 'when we are children'. 'We are very don't have a lot that kind of' mixes negation and noun phrases; correct to 'we do not have much of that kind of knowledge'. Improve by ensuring each clause has a clear subject and verb, use correct comparative form, and avoid repeating pronouns unnecessarily.

× Yes, I think being a polite is very important because if we talk politely to someone someone who have anger issues we can we can easily control them also and politeness is the very most important thing of a human's life which required a lot.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because if we speak politely to someone who has anger issues, we can often calm them down; also, politeness is one of the most important things in a person's life and requires much effort.

Article and noun usage errors: 'being a polite' incorrectly uses the article 'a' before an adjective; use 'being polite'. Redundant 'someone someone' should be a single 'someone'. 'Who have anger issues' needs subject-verb agreement: use 'who has anger issues'. Repetition 'we can we can' should be 'we can' or 'we can often'. 'Control them' is better phrased as 'calm them down' for naturalness. 'The very most important thing of a human's life which required a lot' has article, possessive and tense issues; better as 'one of the most important things in a person's life and requires much effort'. Suggestions: remove incorrect articles before adjectives, ensure subject-verb agreement, avoid repetition, and choose natural collocations.