礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更有条理并用更准确的短语。注意避免重复（比如“usually”出现两次），并把句子分成主题句和支持句。可以加入连接词（for example, because）来增强逻辑，并把时间或方式说清楚。发音与语法上注意时态和连词位置，例如把“they usually taught me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’”整理为更自然的句子。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always taught me to say “please” and “thank you” when meeting people, and they modelled polite behaviour themselves, so I gradually picked up those manners.

建議: 答案需要更准确的词汇搭配和更简洁的表达。避免语法错误（例如“polite can make me”应为“being polite helps me”），并使用连接词（for example, therefore）给出具体理由或例子。尝试把两句合并成一到两句更自然的回答。

範例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps me get along with others, such as my friends and family. For example, saying thank you and listening carefully usually leads to better relationships and fewer misunderstandings.

× Mainly from my parents they usually say they usually taught me to say please thank you all the time when I when we meet other people.

✓ Mainly from my parents. They usually taught me to say "please" and "thank you" all the time when we met other people.

句子中有多处结构混乱与重复（例如“they usually say they usually taught”），导致连词和句子衔接错误。将句子拆成两句并去掉重复的词可以使意思更清楚。建议：1) 避免在一个句子中重复同一信息；2) 当表达过去习惯时使用过去时（这里改为“taught”并把“meet”改为过去式“met”）。

× Mainly from my parents they usually say they usually taught me to say please thank you all the time when I when we meet other people.

✓ Mainly from my parents. They usually taught me to say "please" and "thank you" all the time when we met other people.

原句中同时出现现在时和过去时混用（“they usually say”与“they usually taught”），且与时间背景（小时候）不一致。应统一使用过去时来描述童年习惯。例如将“say”改为“taught”，并把“meet”改为过去式“met”。

× Mainly from my parents they usually say they usually taught me to say please thank you all the time when I when we meet other people.

✓ Mainly from my parents. They usually taught me to say "please" and "thank you" all the time when we met other people.

原句中“when I when we meet”出现重复且“meet”应与整体时态一致，描述过去的情况应使用过去式而非动名词或现在进行式。建议：用“when we met”替代“when we meet”。

× It's very important for me because polite can make me get along well with other people such as my friends and my family.

✓ It's very important to me because being polite helps me get along well with other people, such as my friends and family.

原句中“polite”作为形容词直接放在主语位置，语法不正确。应使用动名词短语“being polite”作为主语或用不定式结构。并且动词搭配应为“helps me get along”而不是“can make me get along”。建议将“polite”改为“being polite”，并使用“helps”或“can help”与不定式/动词原形搭配。

× And besides being polite can help us gain good relationship with other people.

✓ Besides, being polite can help us build good relationships with other people.

原句时态和词汇搭配稍有问题，另外“good relationship”在此处应为复数形式“good relationships”或用不可数结构“a good relationship”。建议使用“can help us build”或“helps us build”，并将“relationship”改为复数以表示与不同人的多重关系。