礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子有信息但不够完整且有语法和表达不清的问题。建议：1) 开头用一到两句主题句直接回答问题；2) 用连接词（for example, also, moreover）把细节连贯起来；3) 修正语法（例如“ask me to do in Koin”不明确，应改为“asked me to behave properly at home and in public”）；4) 补全未完的句子并提供具体例子和简短结果。练习时控制在最多5句内。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and my teachers. For example, my parents always asked me to behave properly at home and in public, such as saying “please” and “thank you” and throwing rubbish into the bin. Moreover, my primary school teachers reinforced these habits by praising polite behaviour, which encouraged me to keep practising them.

建議: 回答观点明确，但有语法错误和冗余词（如“implied is”与“双重 also”）。建议：1) 用一到两句清晰表达观点；2) 用链接词（because, therefore, for example）展开并给出具体原因或结果；3) 修正语法，避免重复词；4) 提供一个简短的例子或结果来支持观点。保持答案自然且不超过5句。

範例: Definitely yes. Being polite shows self-discipline and respect for others because it helps people communicate smoothly. For example, simple polite gestures like greeting colleagues or saying thank you can reduce conflicts and make daily interactions more pleasant, which contributes to social harmony.

× I learned to be polite mainly from two sources. On one hand, my parents always ask me to do in Koin and outside, for example, they always reminded me to throw rubbish into the bin and on the other hand my teachers always

✓ I learned to be polite mainly from two sources. On the one hand, my parents always asked me to do so at home and outside; for example, they always reminded me to throw rubbish into the bin. On the other hand, my teachers always ...

问题类型（27/5/26）：该句包含主谓一致（parents 与现在时 ask 不一致）和时态混用问题（前句用过去时 learned/asked，但部分动词使用现在时），以及句子结构不完整。建议：1) 保持时态一致：既然开头用过去时 learned，后续关于父母的行为应使用过去时 asked/ reminded。2) 修正短语错误：将“do in Koin”改为合适表达（如“do so at home”）。3) 使用标点分隔并补全不完整句子（句末的“my teachers always”需补全具体内容或改为省略号表示未完成）。简明建议：把动词变为过去时（asked, reminded），修正短语为“at home and outside”，并补全或结束句子。

× Definitely yes. I think it implied is a kind of self discipline and shows respect to others. Also I think it also plays a key role of maintaining the social harmony.

✓ Definitely yes. I think it implies a kind of self-discipline and shows respect for others. Also, I think it also plays a key role in maintaining social harmony.

问题类型（26/9/11/13）：句子结构和动词形式错误（用 implied 被动或过去式不当，正确为现在时 implies），以及词语搭配和介词使用不当（self discipline 应加连字符且更常见为 self-discipline；shows respect to others 常用搭配为 show respect for someone；plays a key role of 改为 plays a key role in）。建议：1) 将动词改为一般现在时（implies），因为这是对一个普遍事实的陈述。2) 使用正确搭配（self-discipline, respect for others, key role in）。3) 精简重复词（删除重复的 I think/also）。简明建议：用现在时 implies，改正搭配为“shows respect for others”和“plays a key role in maintaining social harmony”。