礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子结构和用词需要更自然、准确，减少填充词（如“umm”, “uh”）并纠正语法与搭配错误。例如将“I like taught me”改为“I was taught”或“My parents taught me”，把“peoples”改为“people”。同时可以增加一到两个具体的例子或情景来丰富内容，但总句数不超过5句，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: My parents taught me to be polite from a young age. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” after meals and when asking for something. Because they set a good example, I learned to greet visitors politely and listen respectfully during conversations.

建議: 需要改进句子流畅度与语法，用更准确的短语表达观点并补充具体原因或例子。避免直译式表达（如“leave others good”应为“leave a good impression”），注意单复数与冠词（如“a good first impression”和“the foundation of”）。可以用一两句支持理由并用连词连接，保持自然且不冗长。

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps you make a good first impression. Being polite also shows respect and can help build trust, which is essential for starting new friendships or professional relationships.

× I like taught me how umm says please and thank you, uh, when I, uh, meet new peoples.

✓ They taught me how to say "please" and "thank you" when I met new people.

错误类型：代词和句子结构使用不当。原句中“I like taught me”不合逻辑，主语和宾语混淆，应为父母（they）教我；“says”是第三人称单数形式，且与主语不匹配，应使用不定式结构“to say”；“peoples”是可数名词的错误复数形式，表示“people”时不可数且不加-s；时态需与前文“learnt”一致使用过去时，因此把“meet”改为“met”。建议：把句子主语明确为they，使用“taught me to say”，并使用“people”而非“peoples”，时态保持一致。

× I like taught me how umm says please and thank you, uh, when I, uh, meet new peoples.

✓ They taught me how to say "please" and "thank you" when I met new people.

错误类型：单复数错误。单词“peoples”在表示一般的“人们”时应使用“people”，不是“peoples”。“peoples”一般用于指不同民族或民族群体（复数含义），而非这里的语境。建议：使用“new people”。

× I like taught me how umm says please and thank you, uh, when I, uh, meet new peoples.

✓ They taught me how to say "please" and "thank you" when I met new people.

错误类型：第三人称单数使用错误。原句中“says”用了第三人称单数形式，但句子中并不存在导致使用第三人称单数的主语，且此处应使用不定式“to say”而不是动词变位。建议：使用“to say”。

× I like taught me how umm says please and thank you, uh, when I, uh, meet new peoples.

✓ They taught me how to say "please" and "thank you" when I met new people.

错误类型：过去时使用不一致。原句中已使用“learnt”表明过去时，因此后续描述也应使用过去时；“meet”应改为过去式“met”。建议：保持时态一致，使用“met”。

× I like taught me how umm says please and thank you, uh, when I, uh, meet new peoples.

✓ They taught me how to say "please" and "thank you" when I met new people.

错误类型：句子结构混乱。原句有“I like taught me”这样的结构错误，主语、宾语和谓语没有正确配合。应重构为“主语（They）+谓语（taught）+宾语（me）+宾语补足语（how to say ...）”。建议：重写句子，明确主语并使用正确的动词短语结构。

× I think especially when you meet new people and being polite is a way to leave others good.

✓ I think especially when you meet new people, being polite is a way to make a good impression on others.

错误类型：形容词/副词及搭配错误。原句“leave others good”不是地道表达，应该使用“make a good impression on others”（给别人留下好印象），“leave”与“good”搭配不当。建议：使用固定搭配“make a good impression on someone”来表达“留下好印象”。

× I think especially when you meet new people and being polite is a way to leave others good. First is impression and it can also be the foundations of new relationship so it's definitely important.

✓ I think that, especially when you meet new people, being polite is a way to make a good impression. First impressions are important, and politeness can also be the foundation of a new relationship, so it's definitely important.

错误类型：句子结构错误与断句不清。原句缺少连词或逗号分隔，使句意混乱；“First is impression”语序和表达错误，应为“First impressions are important”；“foundations”与单数“a new relationship”数不一致，应使用单数“foundation”。建议：使用从句连接并调整名词单数/复数一致性，分成几句表达清楚。},{