礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更简洁且语法正确，注意时态和句子连贯。可以先用一句主题句直接回答（例如：I learned politeness from my parents），然后给出具体细节并用连接词衔接（because/so/for example）。避免重复和口头禅，如“meaning”或不必要的停顿。举例说明父母如何教导（提醒用词、以身作则）并使用正确的过去时。

範例: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they modelled polite behaviour themselves, so I naturally copied them. For example, my mother would gently correct me if I forgot to say thank you at the dinner table.

建議: 回答总体清楚但要注意流利度与避免重复（例如“双写get”）、填充词（“umm”）。可先给出直接观点，然后用具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词（because/for example）使语意更连贯。注意时态和动词形式（meeting → meet）。

範例: Yes, absolutely. Being polite shows respect and helps people get along better because it creates a friendly atmosphere. For example, in my culture we usually greet someone formally and use polite phrases when meeting them for the first time, which helps make a good impression.

× I learned to be polite meaning from my parents when I am child they always told me to say thank you and please if I forgot if I've got they will they would remind me.

✓ I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. They always told me to say "thank you" and "please." If I forgot, they would remind me.

问题类型：现在时态/过去时态混用（应使用过去时）。说明：原句中出现了时态混用（例如“I learned”是过去时，但随后用“when I am child”“they will/they would”使时态混乱）。建议：描述过去的经历时应保持一致使用过去时：把“when I am child”改为“when I was a child”，并将与过去习惯相关的情形用过去常态表达，如“they would remind me”。另外拆分为两个句子并补充冠词与标点，使句子更清晰。

× So they also acted politely themselves so I followed.

✓ They also acted politely themselves, so I followed their example.

问题类型：代词使用不当。说明：原句“so I followed”缺少宾语，导致含义不明确。建议：补充宾语如“their example”或“them”来明确跟随的对象；同时合并重复的连词，使用逗号分隔使句子更自然。

× Yes, absolutely. It shows respect to others and helps people get get along better.

✓ Yes, absolutely. It shows respect for others and helps people get along better.

问题类型：句子结构错误与重复词/介词使用不当。说明：原句有单词重复“get get”，并且介词搭配更常用“show respect for someone”而非“to others”。建议：删除重复单词，改为“shows respect for others”，并保持动词短语“get along”完整。

× In my culture we try to be polite, especially when we umm meeting someone for the first time.

✓ In my culture we try to be polite, especially when we are meeting someone for the first time.

问题类型：动词+ing形式使用（现在分词后需有适当助动词/连接词）。说明：原句“when we umm meeting”缺少助动词“are”来构成进行时或应改为不进行时的结构“when we meet”。建议：根据语境选择时态，若指一般情况改为“when we meet someone for the first time”；若强调正在发生改为“when we are meeting”。此处改为“are meeting”以保持自然口语表达。