礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答需更直接且用词准确；注意语法（时态、动词形式、冠词）和拼写错误（如 "pilot" 应为 "polite"）。开头可用一句主题句简单交代，然后用一两个具体例子支持，使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。例如说明谁教的、怎样教的、以及你具体做了什么。保持不超过五句，避免冗余。

範例: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and to greet guests respectfully. For example, before entering someone’s home I learned to say hello and offer a small gift. Because of this, I grew up feeling comfortable showing respect to others.

建議: 回答要更准确、条理更清晰。注意句子结构（如主谓一致、动词不定式/分词形式）和用词（例如 “applied” 用法错误；"recognization" 应为 "recognition"）。先给出主观点，然后用两到三点具体理由支持，每点用连接词（For example, Because, Also）。避免模糊或不正确的表达，保持句子简短。

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important. For example, polite behaviour makes others see you as reliable and confident, which helps build trust. Also, being polite improves relationships at work and in daily life because people appreciate respectful behaviour.

× Well, well, actually when I was a child, my parents always told me to be pilot with the strangers and our family members.

✓ Well, actually, when I was a child, my parents always told me to be polite with strangers and family members.

句中将“polite”误拼为“pilot”，并且使用了不必要的定冠词和介词搭配有误。应使用形容词“polite”表示有礼貌，搭配为“be polite with someone”。同时去掉多余的“the”。建议：注意常见词的拼写与搭配，记住固定搭配“be polite with somebody”。

× For example, they told me to great wisdom and to give them some small gift to show my gratitude and the appreciation.

✓ For example, they told me to greet visitors and to give them a small gift to show my gratitude and appreciation.

原句中“great wisdom”应为动词“greet”（问候、打招呼），不是名词“great wisdom”。此外“some small gift”可以简化为“a small gift”，“my gratitude and the appreciation”中“the appreciation”多余且用法不当，改为“appreciation”。建议：区分发音相近但词义不同的单词（greet vs great），并注意不可数名词搭配（gratitude, appreciation）。

× Yes, definitely. I think be polite is really important for ourselves.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think being polite is really important for us.

动词短语“be polite”在此处作为名词性短语应使用动名词形式“being polite”。此外“for ourselves”在此语境下不自然，应使用“for us”。建议：当整个动词短语用作主语或宾语时使用动名词（V-ing）；选择更自然的代词搭配。

× For example, if you applied personally, other people would think that you are reliable and confident and they really want to make recognization with you.

✓ For example, if you act politely, other people will think that you are reliable and confident and they will want to get to know you.

原句中时态和词汇使用混乱："applied personally"不合适，应表示“表现得礼貌”用“act politely”；条件句应与一般现在/将来时搭配，改为“if you act... will...”以表达真实条件。"make recognization with you"不是正确表达，改为“get to know you”或“recognize you”。建议：注意条件句的时态一致性，并使用常见表达如“get to know someone”。

× And for another aspect is that if you applied to the other people, you are worth.

✓ Another aspect is that if you are polite to other people, you are more worthwhile/respected.

原句结构混乱且用词不当："And for another aspect is that"结构需简化为"Another aspect is that"；"if you applied to the other people"应为“if you are polite to other people”；"you are worth"不完整，不知道所指，应改为“you are more worthwhile”或“you gain more respect”。建议：保持句子主谓清晰，使用完整的形容词或名词短语（worthwhile, respected），并注意固定搭配“be polite to someone”。